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I never seem to understand people in Naruto's world. They don't seem to hold any expectations of people being decent human beings. All his 'friends' just pretend that they is nothing they could do about it, is that apathy? laziness? but I really don't understand Tsunade and Shizune staying there at all, and Jiraiya is just a horrible godfather, he didn't help Naruto and puts up with all the shit they put him through with barely a thought. With his 'friends' so numerous you'd think that at least one of them would have explained about the shadow clone memory transfer... the emotional and logic gaps of Naruto, wow
I never seem to understand people in Naruto's world. They don't seem to hold any expectations of people being decent human beings. All his 'friends' just pretend that they is nothing they could do about it, is that apathy? laziness? but I really don't understand Tsunade and Shizune staying there at all, and Jiraiya is just a horrible godfather, he didn't help Naruto and puts up with all the shit they put him through with barely a thought. With his 'friends' so numerous you'd think that at least one of them would have explained about the shadow clone memory transfer... the emotional and logic gaps of Naruto, wow
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3keller.blair1
You know boil and lava don't really fit the village hidden in the water if you want naruto to be a true water shinobi may give him wind, water, earth and lightning release with a storm, ice, wood
And then make him a sage of crocodiles or hydra
3keller.blair1You know boil and lava don't really fit the village hidden in the water if you want naruto to be a true water shinobi may give him wind, water, earth and lightning release with a storm, ice, wood
And then make him a sage of crocodiles or hydra
1/16/2020 c9 Re Lovely Lover
1) I dont think they can get away with having 2 grown adults and known 7 swordsman pretend to be jonin...
Considering they already showed themselves to multiple participating groups and even disguised if the 3rd exam is the same those watching will see through the disguise with ease and see their blatant skill. No way they'd stand for something so blatant.
2) Get strong enough to face the masked guy yet reveal themselves after a whopping 1 year? Also exposing he has the 3 tails to Itachi and the others with the different tails shown?
1) I dont think they can get away with having 2 grown adults and known 7 swordsman pretend to be jonin...
Considering they already showed themselves to multiple participating groups and even disguised if the 3rd exam is the same those watching will see through the disguise with ease and see their blatant skill. No way they'd stand for something so blatant.
2) Get strong enough to face the masked guy yet reveal themselves after a whopping 1 year? Also exposing he has the 3 tails to Itachi and the others with the different tails shown?
1/16/2020 c8 Re Lovely Lover
Chunin exams, as soon as I read that I remembered Karin. But again this new Naruto is.. idk.
Chunin exams, as soon as I read that I remembered Karin. But again this new Naruto is.. idk.
1/16/2020 c6 Re Lovely Lover
As the sphere of corrosive chakra was launched at Naruto he started to laugh manically
wtf went on here?
Hows a necklace merging transform his body, bones and all. Make him lose his shit, gain access to the wood element with instinctive knowledge of using the dragon jutsu with it?
As for Biju, what comes to mind would be Matatabi with Yugito. Chomei with Fu who while I think us male could easily be female with all the well known bugs being known for their queens. I've heard Kokua is female somewhere... and of course theirs changing Kurama with the whole voice thing being intentional plus the size making it deeper.
As the sphere of corrosive chakra was launched at Naruto he started to laugh manically
wtf went on here?
Hows a necklace merging transform his body, bones and all. Make him lose his shit, gain access to the wood element with instinctive knowledge of using the dragon jutsu with it?
As for Biju, what comes to mind would be Matatabi with Yugito. Chomei with Fu who while I think us male could easily be female with all the well known bugs being known for their queens. I've heard Kokua is female somewhere... and of course theirs changing Kurama with the whole voice thing being intentional plus the size making it deeper.
1/16/2020 c5 Re Lovely Lover
Karui is a potential one considering his access and potential relationship to one of the 7 swordsmen.
Though only a rare few ever add Karui for some fricken reason and even those who do often drop it when before they meet. I think she looks pretty good and is outright hot when older.
Everyone's primary focus with kumo though is Samui with the occasional add of Yugito. Surprisingly ignoring Mabui as well.
Curious if hes at least going to encounter Fu.
Darker skinned girls are a bit too rare in anime and seem to end up a rarity in harems as well in fanfictions.
Karui is a potential one considering his access and potential relationship to one of the 7 swordsmen.
Though only a rare few ever add Karui for some fricken reason and even those who do often drop it when before they meet. I think she looks pretty good and is outright hot when older.
Everyone's primary focus with kumo though is Samui with the occasional add of Yugito. Surprisingly ignoring Mabui as well.
Curious if hes at least going to encounter Fu.
Darker skinned girls are a bit too rare in anime and seem to end up a rarity in harems as well in fanfictions.
1/16/2020 c4 Re Lovely Lover
1) Well that's a disappointment right from the start. Fics with Temari aren't plentiful and I'm a fan of the pairing. Especially since I read the Nemar story and thought more on what her character could be like.
Though with the potential Naruto Uchiha going on here I'm not especially enthused on him ending up with anyone really. Again I hope that shit gets stomped out quick.
Curious that the Shika/Temari pairing is too likable to not have happen but the Naruto/Hinata one is discardable.
2) Said Naruto before ending with a sinister and slightly lustful smirk.
okay? Very interesting switching around with his emotions going on. Normal, life has no meaning, let's sexually harrass the leader of an army of rebels who's teaching him. Due to inspiration from a peeper who writes and is proud of his books.
Also sinister? Naruto?
3) no surprise he suddenly ended up a pervert?
Iruka. ?
Ebisu, since when did he spend a bunch of time with him?
Kakashi, he sees him reading a book and is eventually made aware its smut. That affects him how?
Jaraiya, training him for that one month affected him so easily?
4) Blatant fairly heavy handed sexual harrassment with a banana. He wasnt afraid in the slightest and thought it a good idea why? Jaraiya peeps and writes, that's a fricken stretch to go to from being inspired by Jaraiya.
1) Well that's a disappointment right from the start. Fics with Temari aren't plentiful and I'm a fan of the pairing. Especially since I read the Nemar story and thought more on what her character could be like.
Though with the potential Naruto Uchiha going on here I'm not especially enthused on him ending up with anyone really. Again I hope that shit gets stomped out quick.
Curious that the Shika/Temari pairing is too likable to not have happen but the Naruto/Hinata one is discardable.
2) Said Naruto before ending with a sinister and slightly lustful smirk.
okay? Very interesting switching around with his emotions going on. Normal, life has no meaning, let's sexually harrass the leader of an army of rebels who's teaching him. Due to inspiration from a peeper who writes and is proud of his books.
Also sinister? Naruto?
3) no surprise he suddenly ended up a pervert?
Iruka. ?
Ebisu, since when did he spend a bunch of time with him?
Kakashi, he sees him reading a book and is eventually made aware its smut. That affects him how?
Jaraiya, training him for that one month affected him so easily?
4) Blatant fairly heavy handed sexual harrassment with a banana. He wasnt afraid in the slightest and thought it a good idea why? Jaraiya peeps and writes, that's a fricken stretch to go to from being inspired by Jaraiya.
1/16/2020 c3 Re Lovely Lover
1) Why is even he referring to himself having bloodlines? Just because he has high affinity with multiple elements and has teachers with bloodlines teaching him how to mix them doesn't mean he has a bloodline for the mixtures.
2) No purpose because of his loss if connection to the leaf? Couldn't he join Suna? Why the complete lack of interest in going from the beginning yet he is still on his mind enough to wonder if what he is feeling is what Gaara felt?
3) Nothing to read? I thought Jaraiya gave him a book?
4) Fucking great. Naruto turning into Sasuke is an oh so pleasant thought. I hope that doesnt become a thing.
5) Hated for being a jinchuruuki all his life and is exiled then spills his secret to a person he barely knows who's in a war after he tells her he didnt intend to stick around after the war. Fucking brilliant.
1) Why is even he referring to himself having bloodlines? Just because he has high affinity with multiple elements and has teachers with bloodlines teaching him how to mix them doesn't mean he has a bloodline for the mixtures.
2) No purpose because of his loss if connection to the leaf? Couldn't he join Suna? Why the complete lack of interest in going from the beginning yet he is still on his mind enough to wonder if what he is feeling is what Gaara felt?
3) Nothing to read? I thought Jaraiya gave him a book?
4) Fucking great. Naruto turning into Sasuke is an oh so pleasant thought. I hope that doesnt become a thing.
5) Hated for being a jinchuruuki all his life and is exiled then spills his secret to a person he barely knows who's in a war after he tells her he didnt intend to stick around after the war. Fucking brilliant.
1/16/2020 c2 Re Lovely Lover
A few questions when reading this.
1) He is lacking money. Why? Youd think Jaraiya or Kakashi would give him some for an attempt at getting a new home.
2) Basic scrolls can store love people? Unless that freezing bit killed him, but I assumed it somehow didnt since there was just a bit about him being bothered by killing and he was casual about that move.
3) I'm confused why he wouldnt hit Suna first and see his friend. Maybe get a map which is surprising he hadnt gotten one in the first place but still no Suna?
4) Tsunade acting that way bugs me. The reasoning is well. What on earth is going on in the village that's so important that she requires him to stay in the village having Jaraiya both ignore his spy network and Naruto who she cares about heading to a village they should be fully aware is having a civil war.
In fact Kakashi even pointing him that direction is strange as hell since he shouldnt be clueless to it either but damn sure Jaraiya shouldnt nor Tsunade who shouldve been given at least a quick run through on the known statuses of the other major villages.
A few questions when reading this.
1) He is lacking money. Why? Youd think Jaraiya or Kakashi would give him some for an attempt at getting a new home.
2) Basic scrolls can store love people? Unless that freezing bit killed him, but I assumed it somehow didnt since there was just a bit about him being bothered by killing and he was casual about that move.
3) I'm confused why he wouldnt hit Suna first and see his friend. Maybe get a map which is surprising he hadnt gotten one in the first place but still no Suna?
4) Tsunade acting that way bugs me. The reasoning is well. What on earth is going on in the village that's so important that she requires him to stay in the village having Jaraiya both ignore his spy network and Naruto who she cares about heading to a village they should be fully aware is having a civil war.
In fact Kakashi even pointing him that direction is strange as hell since he shouldnt be clueless to it either but damn sure Jaraiya shouldnt nor Tsunade who shouldve been given at least a quick run through on the known statuses of the other major villages.
1/16/2020 c1 Re Lovely Lover
I've never... been a big fan if exile stories. In the cases where Tsunade is leader which in this case o think she shouldve already been sworn in. Either way if she was shouldve been the one with the final if not complete decision as the commander and chief as it were.
Beyond that as part of the military it shouldve been up to the ninja leadership. If the argument is to the safety if the village despite the fact it's a stretch to involve the civilian council it should still involve the ninja half.
Even THEN I'm iffy on it being a 51 49 vote requirement for something like exile.
As a personal thought/wish I've always expected to see but never have seen one where Tsunade goes with him. I mean she came just because of him and then to have him booted right after i could see her thinking "fuck this twisted village" and going after him since she didnt want to be there in the first place.
Heck the first two she gave her necklace 2 died for the village. For the third who's a good kid and person to then be booted is a big fuck this moment for her. Yet shes always a bit apologetic and let's him head right out. Somehow completely incapable despite being the leader. Village leader with authority by the daimyo yet has no power.
Bugs the crap out of me.
I've never... been a big fan if exile stories. In the cases where Tsunade is leader which in this case o think she shouldve already been sworn in. Either way if she was shouldve been the one with the final if not complete decision as the commander and chief as it were.
Beyond that as part of the military it shouldve been up to the ninja leadership. If the argument is to the safety if the village despite the fact it's a stretch to involve the civilian council it should still involve the ninja half.
Even THEN I'm iffy on it being a 51 49 vote requirement for something like exile.
As a personal thought/wish I've always expected to see but never have seen one where Tsunade goes with him. I mean she came just because of him and then to have him booted right after i could see her thinking "fuck this twisted village" and going after him since she didnt want to be there in the first place.
Heck the first two she gave her necklace 2 died for the village. For the third who's a good kid and person to then be booted is a big fuck this moment for her. Yet shes always a bit apologetic and let's him head right out. Somehow completely incapable despite being the leader. Village leader with authority by the daimyo yet has no power.
Bugs the crap out of me.