for Broken Before5/31/2020 c4 Guest
Again PoorlyvWritten So Blue the other 6 kids do notcget in trouble for nearly beating a Kid to death.. Okay.
Again PoorlyvWritten So Blue the other 6 kids do notcget in trouble for nearly beating a Kid to death.. Okay.
12/16/2018 c10 Guest
I cried
I cried
6/26/2016 c1 Aidan
I loved Broken and I am not really sure about the original SomeWhereinNevada614's current point in life whether deceased or alive if the person is still alive IDK and if deceased I'm sorry and if still fighting remember don't be like Ash from the anime and lose the League
I loved Broken and I am not really sure about the original SomeWhereinNevada614's current point in life whether deceased or alive if the person is still alive IDK and if deceased I'm sorry and if still fighting remember don't be like Ash from the anime and lose the League
11/26/2014 c2 xSKILLETFANx
Awe so cute how she cares so much for red. Her being there for him like that.
Awe so cute how she cares so much for red. Her being there for him like that.
5/8/2014 c12 
2pokemon wars 22
well this seems to be a happier story than the first Broken. i like it, it explains a lot from the past
2pokemon wars 22well this seems to be a happier story than the first Broken. i like it, it explains a lot from the past
2/28/2014 c6 N0th1N
Even though I am an oldrivalshipper / conflictingshipper, I like your Broken series a lot C:
Even though I am an oldrivalshipper / conflictingshipper, I like your Broken series a lot C:
11/29/2013 c12 Guest
You rock I hope that cancer clears up
You rock I hope that cancer clears up
9/18/2013 c3 Guest
Whoa...Um...author, I know this guy is a first-class douche and an annoying bastard but I dont think he'll go that far. 0_0
Whoa...Um...author, I know this guy is a first-class douche and an annoying bastard but I dont think he'll go that far. 0_0
9/14/2013 c1 Lovino Vargas
("Hey, Spain! We were able to harvest a hell of a lot of tomatoes again this year, jackass!")
Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato!
Red on the bottom and green on the top, toma- toma- tomato! Hmph!
There are tomatoes in my pasta!
And tomatoes on my pizza!
My charming red treasure, how I love tomatoes!
But
Wurst and potatoes are heretical things!
My brother eats them and just gets more- more- and more macho!
What is a Napolitan doing with Japanese cooking, you traitor!
"Aaaah!
It's France! Protect me, God damn bastard!"
("Don't leave me alone with that son of a bitch!")
I'll give you another one! I'll give you a beautiful one!
Eat a delicious tomato and come dance with me!
(Amore![1])
Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato!
Ci Vediamo[2]! Ah, Romano!
I'm South Italy!
"Aaah... I'm starving! But this isn't close to over, hell!"
Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato!
Red on the top and green on the bottom, toma- toma- tomato! Hmph!
Spain brought some! He brought some from America!
My country's national treasure, how I love tomatoes!
But
This isn't just for reciting words of love
The wine glass in his hand is always twink- twink- and twinkling
And when I was an adorable kid back, when I was ignored, that dick!
"AAAAAAAAAH!
God damn it! I'm always the one being targetted!"
("Spain, you bastard, come rescue me already!")
Buono tomato, buono!
Tomato buono buono, ooh! Tomato!
The Mediterranean Sea too! O sole mio![3]
I'm South Italy!
I may not be useful with chores
And brother may be better with art and trade
And sometimes I may be as dumb as a bird
But I...! But I...! CHIGIIIIIIII-!
Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato...
(Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato!)
Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato!
(Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato!)
Uno・Due・Tre・Dai![4]
I'll give you another one! I'll give you a beautiful one!
Eat a delicious tomato and come dance with me!
(Amore!)
Buono tomato, buono!
Tomato buono buono, ooh! Tomato!
Ci Vediamo! Ah, Romano!
I'm South Italy!
("Hey, Spain! We were able to harvest a hell of a lot of tomatoes again this year, jackass!")
Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato!
Red on the bottom and green on the top, toma- toma- tomato! Hmph!
There are tomatoes in my pasta!
And tomatoes on my pizza!
My charming red treasure, how I love tomatoes!
But
Wurst and potatoes are heretical things!
My brother eats them and just gets more- more- and more macho!
What is a Napolitan doing with Japanese cooking, you traitor!
"Aaaah!
It's France! Protect me, God damn bastard!"
("Don't leave me alone with that son of a bitch!")
I'll give you another one! I'll give you a beautiful one!
Eat a delicious tomato and come dance with me!
(Amore![1])
Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato!
Ci Vediamo[2]! Ah, Romano!
I'm South Italy!
"Aaah... I'm starving! But this isn't close to over, hell!"
Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato!
Red on the top and green on the bottom, toma- toma- tomato! Hmph!
Spain brought some! He brought some from America!
My country's national treasure, how I love tomatoes!
But
This isn't just for reciting words of love
The wine glass in his hand is always twink- twink- and twinkling
And when I was an adorable kid back, when I was ignored, that dick!
"AAAAAAAAAH!
God damn it! I'm always the one being targetted!"
("Spain, you bastard, come rescue me already!")
Buono tomato, buono!
Tomato buono buono, ooh! Tomato!
The Mediterranean Sea too! O sole mio![3]
I'm South Italy!
I may not be useful with chores
And brother may be better with art and trade
And sometimes I may be as dumb as a bird
But I...! But I...! CHIGIIIIIIII-!
Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato...
(Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato!)
Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato!
(Buono! Tomato, buono! Tomato
Buono buono, ooh! Tomato!)
Uno・Due・Tre・Dai![4]
I'll give you another one! I'll give you a beautiful one!
Eat a delicious tomato and come dance with me!
(Amore!)
Buono tomato, buono!
Tomato buono buono, ooh! Tomato!
Ci Vediamo! Ah, Romano!
I'm South Italy!
9/1/2013 c1 15SomewhereinNevada614
To the ignorant guest who just commented on this...
Wow...okay wow...so you're telling me you know how exactly Leaf and Red's personality is? Care to enlighten me? Oh and the manga counterpart doesn't count. If your going to insult my shipping then do it right, in fact I think you're just one of those other shippers aren't you? At least I provide reasons on behalf of their future characteristics in which in this case, you didn't bother reading it.
First off Red does indeed talk, it's been proven on the old red, blue, yellow games on one of the art book with the pikachu polygon shapes. Talking to Leaf! This whole thing where Red is silent, is just the norms, people don't know why or how exactly Red became a silent character and I believe there is a reason. Everything happens for a reason. And now you're saying Leaf's personality isn't right!? Her personality was neither right or wrong in the first place because she simply doesn't exist! We the authors create a personality for her hence forth fanfiction. In fact I can count many shippings that always have the same characteristics like the rest that never were in the first place. Oldrivalshipping? OOC to the core along with Conflictshipping, Blue isn't Gary! My god. Plus it's the same routine over and over again. FLIRT FLIRT FLIRT.
15SomewhereinNevada614To the ignorant guest who just commented on this...
Wow...okay wow...so you're telling me you know how exactly Leaf and Red's personality is? Care to enlighten me? Oh and the manga counterpart doesn't count. If your going to insult my shipping then do it right, in fact I think you're just one of those other shippers aren't you? At least I provide reasons on behalf of their future characteristics in which in this case, you didn't bother reading it.
First off Red does indeed talk, it's been proven on the old red, blue, yellow games on one of the art book with the pikachu polygon shapes. Talking to Leaf! This whole thing where Red is silent, is just the norms, people don't know why or how exactly Red became a silent character and I believe there is a reason. Everything happens for a reason. And now you're saying Leaf's personality isn't right!? Her personality was neither right or wrong in the first place because she simply doesn't exist! We the authors create a personality for her hence forth fanfiction. In fact I can count many shippings that always have the same characteristics like the rest that never were in the first place. Oldrivalshipping? OOC to the core along with Conflictshipping, Blue isn't Gary! My god. Plus it's the same routine over and over again. FLIRT FLIRT FLIRT.
9/1/2013 c1 Guest
BurningLeafShipping pet peeve checklist
- OOC? Check!
- Red talks a lot? Check!
-Red isnt being reserved and stoic? Check!
- Blue/Green has been demonized? Check!
- Leaf being a mary sue? Check!
BurningLeafShipping pet peeve checklist
- OOC? Check!
- Red talks a lot? Check!
-Red isnt being reserved and stoic? Check!
- Blue/Green has been demonized? Check!
- Leaf being a mary sue? Check!
8/31/2013 c12 16GraySparkles
Omgsqueeeeee! Leafy got back to Kanto! But there's Oak, whom I hate. Oh, and reds mom has such a sad life as this happens and stuff.
I can't believe this fic ended! It was SO FLUFFEH!
You are such a talented writer!
16GraySparklesOmgsqueeeeee! Leafy got back to Kanto! But there's Oak, whom I hate. Oh, and reds mom has such a sad life as this happens and stuff.
I can't believe this fic ended! It was SO FLUFFEH!
You are such a talented writer!
8/31/2013 c11 GraySparkles
Oh god... Lance and professor Oak. Hide me!
Anyways, Red's mom, why would you do that? I know Red is in love and its all he thinks and stuff, but jeez, no need to slap him!
Anyways, great chapter!
Oh god... Lance and professor Oak. Hide me!
Anyways, Red's mom, why would you do that? I know Red is in love and its all he thinks and stuff, but jeez, no need to slap him!
Anyways, great chapter!
8/31/2013 c10 GraySparkles
Oh Red. You and your garage sales.
I don't what to write besides so much fluffy clouds of love and rainbows!
Neu... That ending. Why?! It's so sad to see this happen when the years ahead are just going to get worse for them.
Oh Red. You and your garage sales.
I don't what to write besides so much fluffy clouds of love and rainbows!
Neu... That ending. Why?! It's so sad to see this happen when the years ahead are just going to get worse for them.