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5/19/2014 c1 5dedicatedwriter21
Your story was really cute. For a moment there, I really thought they were indeed ... especially after their secret relationship in the cannon. Poor Toshiro though, he must have been extremely uncomfortable to think they were naked and then to be teased about it. Come on, he may be the youngest captain but he still deserves a little respect. Anyhow loved it, and I'm interested to read your next Bleach fic. :)
10/17/2013 c1 13forever122
Ha ha! Can't... stop... laughing! Ha ha ha ha... You should make some more stories like these. If you want any ideas, just ask me.
6/13/2013 c1 haeye
That was awesome.
3/19/2013 c1 4hollow-eyed
this was very cute, although i would have probably enjoyed it more if it was a bit dirtier. haha.
2/16/2013 c1 741Yemi Hikari
When the story started up I thought to myself, "I've read a lot of stories like this, but I like the word choice a lot." Then bam, it wasn't at all what I was expecting. :D
12/11/2012 c1 4Frenchie121
That was hilarious. I can imagine it happening as an actual episode. And btw you got the characters perfectly. I can so see Rangiku and Gin doing that.
9/19/2012 c1 4SayoShihoinXKohAyamerei
Poor Toshiro! Lol this was funny, you should write other fics!

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