
2/20/2016 c1 Guest
You captured Joshua's personality amazingly well! That was really fun to read :)
You captured Joshua's personality amazingly well! That was really fun to read :)
4/30/2013 c1 FeelTheVibe
Simply perfect. You have a great writing style and I also love your portrayal of Joshua's and Neku's relationship and how it slowly progresses. You gave it such a natural flow and that made it so entertaining to read this.
Really a great work.
Simply perfect. You have a great writing style and I also love your portrayal of Joshua's and Neku's relationship and how it slowly progresses. You gave it such a natural flow and that made it so entertaining to read this.
Really a great work.
12/19/2012 c1
4Cold Silence
Awesome one shot! It really hit the spot for my Joshua x Neku craving. Thanks for writing such a great piece!

Awesome one shot! It really hit the spot for my Joshua x Neku craving. Thanks for writing such a great piece!
11/25/2012 c1
43MedliSage
Gorgeous. Really, really absolutely gorgeous, I don't know what else to say. Your works are always so beautiful and it is always such a pleasure to read them. Thank you so much for writing.

Gorgeous. Really, really absolutely gorgeous, I don't know what else to say. Your works are always so beautiful and it is always such a pleasure to read them. Thank you so much for writing.
10/22/2012 c1 Mod Aure
WOW.
Best Josh/Neku fic I've read so far, no joke. They don't sound OOC at all, and you made the whole scene feel so... REAL without having to resort to a lemon scene. Imo, that is a gigantic plus.
Thank you for sharing. Faved. :)
WOW.
Best Josh/Neku fic I've read so far, no joke. They don't sound OOC at all, and you made the whole scene feel so... REAL without having to resort to a lemon scene. Imo, that is a gigantic plus.
Thank you for sharing. Faved. :)
10/10/2012 c1 Aramis
Sooo brilliant! Your Joshua is just the right amount of playful, but I also love how he has his vulnerable moments, too. You don't get a lot of those in this fandom, so I really appreciated it this time. As for Neku, he is just adorable, so easily embarrassed like that. Such a sweet dear, too. I just sighed at the end. I hope to read more from you. Keep it up! :)
Sooo brilliant! Your Joshua is just the right amount of playful, but I also love how he has his vulnerable moments, too. You don't get a lot of those in this fandom, so I really appreciated it this time. As for Neku, he is just adorable, so easily embarrassed like that. Such a sweet dear, too. I just sighed at the end. I hope to read more from you. Keep it up! :)
9/22/2012 c1
27EdeatheDemonFox
Ohgoodness this was so cute. w I was laughing and squeeing and spazzing so freaking hard. Both Neku and Josh are so cute and you wrote them both perfectly! ;w; You should do a sequel to this where Neku gets back in December and he and Josh re-meet. That would be even more adorable.
Also, have to say, you did fantastic with the dialogue! Very witty and fitting for both characters.

Ohgoodness this was so cute. w I was laughing and squeeing and spazzing so freaking hard. Both Neku and Josh are so cute and you wrote them both perfectly! ;w; You should do a sequel to this where Neku gets back in December and he and Josh re-meet. That would be even more adorable.
Also, have to say, you did fantastic with the dialogue! Very witty and fitting for both characters.
9/15/2012 c1
4OlivJuice
Awh, this was really cute. :3 I usually don't like oneshots, because they're usually really short, but this was great. :D Just the kind of story I was looking for. Thanks! :3

Awh, this was really cute. :3 I usually don't like oneshots, because they're usually really short, but this was great. :D Just the kind of story I was looking for. Thanks! :3
9/11/2012 c1 xdefedxdefedxfedfcd
Very good job with this! I found it very interesting and pleasant to read. I couldn't really find any grammatical errors, which is such a relief because some fan fictions are chock full of them and take away from the story! Anyway, I can tell you put in a lot of work into this fic and I thank you for posting it:) I really enjoyed the characters and their personalities, and I just can't get enough of Neku and Josh! *insert fangirl squeal here* I just hope those months go by fast for them.
Very good job with this! I found it very interesting and pleasant to read. I couldn't really find any grammatical errors, which is such a relief because some fan fictions are chock full of them and take away from the story! Anyway, I can tell you put in a lot of work into this fic and I thank you for posting it:) I really enjoyed the characters and their personalities, and I just can't get enough of Neku and Josh! *insert fangirl squeal here* I just hope those months go by fast for them.
9/10/2012 c1 Anon
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JUST
HAVE MY BABIES
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