10/15/2012 c3 ChromeFusion44
Just...
...amazing. .C.
And honestly, it's sad that you guys haven't goten any more reviews. There was just one before me. Seeing that after hours of hard work (and collaboration In this case) really kills a person. ;A; And this was really well-written.
Job well done to both of you guys. :)
Just...
...amazing. .C.
And honestly, it's sad that you guys haven't goten any more reviews. There was just one before me. Seeing that after hours of hard work (and collaboration In this case) really kills a person. ;A; And this was really well-written.
Job well done to both of you guys. :)
9/19/2012 c1 Claus
Im not sure that fanfiction can be this good... If I had to think of any proble its that once you spelled dusk ball as "duck ball," which I thought was on purpose. Long and great, I am blown away by this amazing teamwork here between you and DarkFoxKit.
Im not sure that fanfiction can be this good... If I had to think of any proble its that once you spelled dusk ball as "duck ball," which I thought was on purpose. Long and great, I am blown away by this amazing teamwork here between you and DarkFoxKit.