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12/30/2015 c42 10Amu4ever
Oh my and here I thought he would get a happy ending. He sure would have deserved it...

Oh and am I to only one, who has noticed that there is/was a huge crossover potential in this story? For both HP and Twilight.

Hmm...it would have even made sense, if the wary green eyed doctor was Harry and the son of Eddie a member of the pack of Twilight.

Found it really interesting how things turned out.

I was kinda shocked to be honest, about the lack of reviews that is. I had expected more it is a great story.

But then I guess not many are able to read such an intense plot without it affecting them. It is seriously heavy stuff you covered there.

What oyu wrote was not at all what I expected when I read the summary, but sseing as it developed it was a very welcome surprise. (After the horror of the first chapters darkness and my freak out :D)

I agree with your other reviewer that you do seem to have a deep understanding of the human mind, but that's also dangerous. Considering the way you write and more importantly WHAT you write you should try your best to emotionally distance yourself from your story.

After all darkness like this can draw someone in and keep them in their hold. Wouldn't want that to happen to you, or anyone else for that matter...

I also think that it was a brillant idea of you to end it on a somewhat light ending. It's what we readers need to get out of the dark theme and you as well. It IS kinda hard not to feel with the character while you have to understand them and their reactions better than anyone else, isn't it?

On a brighter note it was a pleasure to be allowed to read your mastpiece.

Thank you for sharing it with us :)
12/30/2015 c39 Amu4ever
Puh I am so glad you write angst and not anxiety :)
12/29/2015 c28 Amu4ever
Whoooh...finally...it's gone to the lighter side :)

Good, good, was afraid I wouldn't get to sleep at all

Good story by the way. Maybe a bit too intense...Well, anyway, gonna go on reading your story soon :)
12/29/2015 c25 Amu4ever
Oh my, didn't think he had it in him
12/29/2015 c24 Amu4ever
Yeah, happy ending come here! Yes!
12/29/2015 c23 Amu4ever
Intelligent! To write a diary! Go Evan!
12/29/2015 c22 Amu4ever
Soooo:

Jerk 1: Hypocrytic doctor snake alias Emily

Jerk 2: Abuser alias Eddy
12/29/2015 c21 Amu4ever
So, she did realice it...well, I have to say I am disappointed in her.
12/29/2015 c20 Amu4ever
Emily is a doctor. She can be a bitch, but she IS a doctor. How can she let someone suffer with the knowledge to help? Is she even one of those, who cause the dilemma?

No, wouldn't make sense... Hmm...the way you let her speak...she is probably cheating on Hanks, but she most likely thinks Evan is a burder. Doesn't realise what's goign on.

She doesn't know, does she? I mean the way she talks she sounds like a jerk, but an abuser? torturer? drug dealer? No...
12/29/2015 c18 Amu4ever
Let him read it! Come on, hopefully he did read it!
12/29/2015 c16 Amu4ever
...Great, over 40 chapters, however am I going to endure this? Yeah, sure, slight angst is fine, but this...this...why are you doing this to him?

Oh my, I hope it's getting lighter soon, because I probably won't stop reading until I can stop being afraid of my own shadow...

There should be one heck of a warning for this story. This is really bad and I am old enough to read such stuff. Imagine the results of something like this to an unsuspecting child?

Don't get me wrong your story is good - terrifyingly so - but it should come with a warning. After all there are whole genres filled with traumaticing stories, which are high quallity.

(Hmm...why can't I get rid of the feeling that I just put my foot in my mouth? Anyway, hope you see this as the constructive critism it's meant to be, instead of whatever kind of babbling I made it seem to be...by accident...)
12/29/2015 c12 Amu4ever
Ok, so, I am absolutely for a bit (- read: a lot) brotherly support from Hank here. Evan sure needs it
12/29/2015 c10 Amu4ever
Oh! Come on! Don't send him in a mental home! Please don't be so curel to Evan! It's not his fault...

And this is seriously nothing you should read while it's dark...wah...(yup, yup, you have got me freaked out here...)
12/29/2015 c7 Amu4ever
You know I have intended to review since chapter one, but you got me in a state of shock. It's something about your story that is pretty scary...at night at least...

It's kinda like the movies in which you are unwilling to let your eyes move from the screen for a moment too terrified of what might happen.
12/29/2015 c2 Amu4ever
Oh my, I wonder what's wrong with him...
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