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10BigReader16
Name: Knight
Digimon Name: Grademon
Personality: Calm and collected. Will attack if angered. Hates anything having to do with evil.
Bio: He was an outcast his whole life. The result, of course, was he grew to be calm in all situations. He could even commit myrder and keep a straight face! He had a family that was murdered by evil digimkn.
Special Attacks: Gigastick Lance, Raging Darkness
10BigReader16Name: Knight
Digimon Name: Grademon
Personality: Calm and collected. Will attack if angered. Hates anything having to do with evil.
Bio: He was an outcast his whole life. The result, of course, was he grew to be calm in all situations. He could even commit myrder and keep a straight face! He had a family that was murdered by evil digimkn.
Special Attacks: Gigastick Lance, Raging Darkness
11/25/2012 c1 1Moonlit Crossroads
Name:Kimiko Iino
Digimon:Lopmon
Personality:Kind and respectful
Gender:Female:
BIO:She touched her digimon, a light shot out and transported them to the digital world.
Special Attacks:
Blazing Ice:Lopmon leaps into the air and quickly shoots small,crystal bolts that can hurt her enemy as well as freeze them.
Lop Twister:Spins to form a tornado that she can throw
1Moonlit CrossroadsName:Kimiko Iino
Digimon:Lopmon
Personality:Kind and respectful
Gender:Female:
BIO:She touched her digimon, a light shot out and transported them to the digital world.
Special Attacks:
Blazing Ice:Lopmon leaps into the air and quickly shoots small,crystal bolts that can hurt her enemy as well as freeze them.
Lop Twister:Spins to form a tornado that she can throw
9/13/2012 c2 Macaroni is real
Best Digimon Story EVER!
Best Digimon Story EVER!
9/13/2012 c1 Very famous guy
Dude! really good story! hoping to read more!
Blackwargreymon's boss!
Dude! really good story! hoping to read more!
Blackwargreymon's boss!
9/14/2012 c2 6sharkpedofromverpets
:/ Y STORMHORSEMON NO BAD ASS?! It's supposed to represent ME! A bunch of Devimon couldn't stop me! I DEFEATED PYROSTARMON FOR GOODNESS SAKE! Oh well. Remember, Destiny is still in my head.
6sharkpedofromverpets:/ Y STORMHORSEMON NO BAD ASS?! It's supposed to represent ME! A bunch of Devimon couldn't stop me! I DEFEATED PYROSTARMON FOR GOODNESS SAKE! Oh well. Remember, Destiny is still in my head.
9/13/2012 c2 silently-regrets
Nice chapter, though I think you have misunderstood Kurai's personality. He's suppose to be wise, not boastful. But it can't be helped, I guess. Kurai's personality'll have to stay like that in your fanfic.
Well, enjoyed Ag's Digivolving into VictoryGreymon. I love that Digimon.
-Emi
Nice chapter, though I think you have misunderstood Kurai's personality. He's suppose to be wise, not boastful. But it can't be helped, I guess. Kurai's personality'll have to stay like that in your fanfic.
Well, enjoyed Ag's Digivolving into VictoryGreymon. I love that Digimon.
-Emi
9/12/2012 c1 sharkpedofromverpets
Nice...I've sent my form by PM. Well dj, or should I call you by your character name, DJ? XD Seriously, nice job though. I was entertained. You've read my fic so you know Stormhorsemon's details.
Nice...I've sent my form by PM. Well dj, or should I call you by your character name, DJ? XD Seriously, nice job though. I was entertained. You've read my fic so you know Stormhorsemon's details.
9/11/2012 c1 silently-regrets
Cool story! Hope to read more! :D
BTW, when titling a story, it should be like this: "The Darkness Concealed Inside"
Name: Kurai
Digimon Name: Gaiomon
Personality: Despite his intimidating looks, Kurai is a kind hearted Digimon that speaks with words before actions. He is wise beyond normal, and usually speaks as a mentor that teaches things to those that need to be taught.
Bio: Before Digivolving into Gaiomon, it was once DexDorugamon; a Digimon that Digivolved through death. Seeking nothing but power from other Digimon, it had hunted DigiCores to Digivolve. But before that happened, a Magnamon X named Kisenax had stopped DexDorugamon from causing more chaos. Kisenax used Magna Blaster to stop DexDorugamon, causing him to revert back into a Digimon called Ryudamon. After that, Kisenax took Ryudamon as an apprentice, and renamed him Kurai. As Kurai grew, he eventually became Gaiomon the Wise King (he’s not actually a king though).
Attacks:
Rinkazan: Uses its Kikurin swords to leave behind eerie tracks of light which tears apart anything that touches them.
Gaia Reactor: Concentrates all the energy within the atmosphere, and then detonates them.
Rinkageki: Combines the two Kikurin swords, which causes the eerie tracks of light to converge all at once, allowing it to attack distant enemies.
-Emi
Cool story! Hope to read more! :D
BTW, when titling a story, it should be like this: "The Darkness Concealed Inside"
Name: Kurai
Digimon Name: Gaiomon
Personality: Despite his intimidating looks, Kurai is a kind hearted Digimon that speaks with words before actions. He is wise beyond normal, and usually speaks as a mentor that teaches things to those that need to be taught.
Bio: Before Digivolving into Gaiomon, it was once DexDorugamon; a Digimon that Digivolved through death. Seeking nothing but power from other Digimon, it had hunted DigiCores to Digivolve. But before that happened, a Magnamon X named Kisenax had stopped DexDorugamon from causing more chaos. Kisenax used Magna Blaster to stop DexDorugamon, causing him to revert back into a Digimon called Ryudamon. After that, Kisenax took Ryudamon as an apprentice, and renamed him Kurai. As Kurai grew, he eventually became Gaiomon the Wise King (he’s not actually a king though).
Attacks:
Rinkazan: Uses its Kikurin swords to leave behind eerie tracks of light which tears apart anything that touches them.
Gaia Reactor: Concentrates all the energy within the atmosphere, and then detonates them.
Rinkageki: Combines the two Kikurin swords, which causes the eerie tracks of light to converge all at once, allowing it to attack distant enemies.
-Emi