Reviews: Chaos Chapter 1

for Chaos Chapter 1

12/6/2016 c2 Guest
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8/26/2015 c7

25Just Ressa
This was a very good story...excited to read #2

5/31/2014 c7

11long-live-HP-PJ-HG
Lovely. *sarcasmsarcasm*

5/31/2014 c6 long-live-HP-PJ-HG
THE NEXT CHAPTER BETTER NOT BE SMUT
THIS STORY IS RATED T

5/31/2014 c5 long-live-HP-PJ-HG
This is getting...interesting...

5/31/2014 c4 long-live-HP-PJ-HG
K then...

5/31/2014 c3 long-live-HP-PJ-HG
Awkward.

5/31/2014 c2 long-live-HP-PJ-HG
HEY
REID IS AWESOME
DON'T DISS REID

5/31/2014 c1 long-live-HP-PJ-HG
Well HOTCH you're the one who decided who was rooming with who

2/8/2013 c7

39Susie G
Great job! Good creativity! There were parts I laughed out loud good sense of humor! Can't wait to read the next part!

12/21/2012 c7

19RealMe07
Sooo cute! I'm gunna go read the sequel now!

10/9/2012 c7 p95000
That was a great story. Some of the lines Hotch, Rossi and Emily had were funny. I liked the old man in the elevator mouthing "Call me" to Emily.

9/16/2012 c7

55Hotly81173
OMG the old guy in the elevator was hilarious... Way to funny :)

This was really good. great job.:)

9/16/2012 c6 Hotly81173
Hhahaha Rossi is such a freak lol... Uh oh he's done pissed off JJ. Can't wait for Hotch and Emily to get home. ;)

9/16/2012 c5 Hotly81173
OMG..."Hotch smiled at Emily with a dimpled grin and said, "I am going to make you come with only my voice." "Well this should be interesting" Emily replied.

While Emily and Hotch were having their conversation Dave was listening to them from two seats behind. 'Well if I can't get any sleep I guess I'll watch. Stupid kids already ruined my first show. This is going to be so good' thought Rossi as he pulled out a bag of popcorn that he bought before they boarded the plane."

Way to funny girl! Soooo good. :)

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