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8/4/2015 c1 59wtchcool
Nice fic! Makes it seem a real pity the show did not have more seasons.

I do hope you'll forgive me for point out a few things: 1. "they was being" should be "were being"; 2. "of their captures" should be "their captors"; 3. again, "of his captures" should be "captors".

The ending feels a little abrupt to me. Was there supposed to be more?

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