4/1 c1 Ben Dover
Kinda shit ngl, jk April fools
Kinda shit ngl, jk April fools
2/27/2017 c1 jack
really good
really good
11/20/2013 c1 6SweetSerenade5281
Good, I remember that part, and I was scared that it was Prim who had to go... But she didn't.
Good, I remember that part, and I was scared that it was Prim who had to go... But she didn't.
1/26/2013 c1 ExpectoPatronumm
The fanfic is good. My orgin language isn't english but I see a lot of mistakes there. Of course, I may be wrong with A LOT OF because like I said I'm not english, but I can see some serious mistakes. I really liked that fanfic, it was nice to read how was Prim feeling on the day of Reaping, but those mistakes were just annoying. Keep writing. :)
The fanfic is good. My orgin language isn't english but I see a lot of mistakes there. Of course, I may be wrong with A LOT OF because like I said I'm not english, but I can see some serious mistakes. I really liked that fanfic, it was nice to read how was Prim feeling on the day of Reaping, but those mistakes were just annoying. Keep writing. :)
9/15/2012 c1 Megan
Best Prim POV I've read so far. Good job!
Best Prim POV I've read so far. Good job!
9/15/2012 c1 Guest
GREAT CHAPTER WRIGHT MORE
GREAT CHAPTER WRIGHT MORE
9/15/2012 c1 Aremuoa
;.; So sad...ive read that book so many times, ive lost track. That part ALWAYS made me cry. Please continue this! im looking forward to it! D
;.; So sad...ive read that book so many times, ive lost track. That part ALWAYS made me cry. Please continue this! im looking forward to it! D