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8/29/2021 c1 177Lorelei Candice Black
liked it
4/13/2018 c1 nicole.howe.737
Please don't stop! It was just getting really interesting :(
8/10/2016 c1 Guest
;O)
8/23/2015 c1 kankusan
Oh my goodness, I can't even...this was just...I don't know how to word right now. Like, are you TRYING to make me swoon until I faint, or what? Darkness and Ronon and hand-holding and gentle embraces and truly squee-worthy kissing? All in the dark. The DARK, people! *falls out of chair*

Yeah, this story was awesome. Just...yeah. Thank you!
9/13/2014 c1 88Lady1Venus
that's a cute conclusion to the episode. funny part is I JUST finished watching that ep shortly before reading your story for the 2nd time ever
6/21/2013 c1 49cilepe
I like the Ronon/Jen relationship. I can't believe they turned the tables and had her with McKay. This was very nice. :)
2/27/2013 c1 20white raven
Lovely! I always love how you have these two pirouette around each other. It's both graceful and clumsy and wonderfully poignant.
11/25/2012 c1 mistressvera
Wow! I really enjoyed it! This is my favorite story about Ronon & Jennifer!
Thanks.
10/9/2012 c1 Guest
Lorelei CAndice Black: I loved it! great story!
9/24/2012 c1 Tholey
Awwwww. so cute! I like the idea of an unsure Ronon when it comes to matters of the heart. I think its really true that even usually confident people, can lose their confidence when it comes to revealing that you like someone for fear of rejection.
9/20/2012 c1 Shellbean
That was a great story. I always thought that they should have gotten together. Again that was great! Shellbean
9/20/2012 c1 12Blencathra
Lovely fic. I did wonder what was going to happen when John was trapped there as well, but you managed to get rid of him nicely. Great build up to the kiss at the end. Happy shippy sigh.
9/20/2012 c1 61ShaViva
Aww, that was so sweet. A great idea to have the power out because it's so believeable how dark it would be if it were night. I like that the dark gave them both a bit of courage, and I also liked how you heightened other things they'd notice because they couldn't see each other. And I'm glad Jenn learned from her last experience getting close to Ronon during an incident - making sure they'd know how to handle things the next day was smart of her! Well done and happy intentions day!
9/19/2012 c1 68everlovin
Wonderful as always. Loved the characterizations and how Jenn doubted what was right in front of her and Ronon doing the same.

Wonderful kiss there at the end *sigh* and a bit of silliness to wrap it all up. Great story!
9/19/2012 c1 22hifield
That was great and perfect for the prompt! Loved the build-up at her door toward the perfect kiss - perfect moment.
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