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1/3/2013 c4 Guest
Can't wait to see how the council reacts. Especially if they head to the Citadel...suddenly, Protheans have ended up looking like weaklings. And Humans are part of why. I so can imagine a moment where they each decide to show what they can do weaponwise on a lifeless planet.
Citadel: hits with a Hiroshima boom...
NC/UNSC: if their was life here, there isn't now. Highly destabilized crust.
Forerunner/Prehistoric!humanity/Prehistorc!Prophets: finds a star with no planets far enough away any civilizations, takes everyone there, on one of their ships. Makes a supernova.
1/2/2013 c4 Trife
Good chapter. In all honesty I kind of skipped your entire codex for the UNSC fleet (looking for the rest of the chapter) and will most likely do the same for the Covenant fleet specs to. Though I guess as a plus if I ever have questions about ship specs I know where to look. But, no offense meant, I'm more interested in the story and not their ship specs.

I hope to see more of the story soon!

1/2/2013 c4 6MEleeSmasher
Very long chapter, but the codex could have been shorter. So what happens next?
12/31/2012 c3 2Flamefather
haha, the citadel and loyalists are sooooo screwed...
12/26/2012 c3 1Anubis9 lord of death
I love this story I relly do i think it is a amazing idea to brieng togather three diffrent types of humains togather. I just get this idea of the USNC / neo-covenant / Covenant loyalist/ System Alliance/Citadel as all being little kids and know the adulits are coming home and how will the kids react I see them as being more being the most proud of USNC and neo-covenant because of the all the hell they want throge and the fact that they have frogiving each other and are working togather. I see them being most dissported in all the others for diffrent reasons. The Covenant loyalist for reasons you went over. The System alliance and Citadel for the main reason they have not bulit there own technolagly all there do is still it from "A long dead race" then there belive that they are the greast power in the galxay and best every when they laws are biases unfair one sided only in there own best intrest I can't wait for them find out not only are not alone there are by far the weakist out of all three powers. I know the Quarian's get kicked off there own planet abboned by the Citadel and left to die in space but what most people seem to froget there stated the moaring war them selves by both buliding the Geth then Trying to wipe them all out just to get ride of there crime and Geth protected them selvis and for 300 years there have done nothinge but live in peace so if any mass effict race disove help it should be them.
12/22/2012 c3 Guest
comon man update its been a month
12/21/2012 c3 Heart0fSt33l
Please update soon, I can't survive without.
12/17/2012 c3 imarki
Nothing short of amazing. With only 1 chapter, you have made this my favorite halo/me fanfic. simply awesome story, please continue this till the end.
12/15/2012 c3 1Daedwartin
C-space is getting one hell of a heart attack.
Turns out they have been dealing with the most primitive human civilization.
12/14/2012 c3 ShadowCub
Quarians and alien loving Systems Alliance, two types of trash to get rid of.
12/13/2012 c3 15TheBleachDoctor
This is an absolutely stunning fic that I don't regret reading! I love how you've structured the world, and it fits so perfectly! I look forward to the next update, and tip my hat to you.
12/10/2012 c3 2finalsacre
It was great.

But it could have been even better were there more description. Especially for the space battle part, the fight seemed to be massive yet it is only mentioned.
Though I understand why. We can't describe every little bit if we want to advance in the story, that is what you did there, you rushed to the part where the Forerunners reveal themselves.
Actually that is close to what I did in one of my story.

I also liked the switch of POV, I find it give more pacing to the story.

And I even more liked the technical data about the tech and the ships. That was my favorite part. In fact, even since my childhood I remember I was more interested in reading/viewing scientific documentaries than true story.

Anyways back on the topic, from what I know your numbers for ME seem very accurate. I can only hope you will do the same for the Halo side.

You might have buffed the citadel but they are still extremely far from the UNSC/Covenant. According to your last chapter, it seems that they 100 times more ships and that each of their ships is 100 times more powerful than a citadel ship.

Not that it bothers me.

I wonder what will be the threats.
12/9/2012 c3 1Uzumaki Red
Hey man this is an amazing story by far my favorite on fanfic its beautifully crafted awe inspiring its awsome love it. And ca you take a look at my story and see how it is it would mean alot to me :) Can't wait for the next update its gonna be sweet i literally made some popcorn and read it while eating it hit the good spot anyways hope I'm not wasting your time keep up the greatest work ever !
12/4/2012 c3 Guest
I have read all of these chapters and i'm very impressed with your work.
1. Prehistoric humanity was never really touched on so i'm glad i get to see some insight as to what someone else thinks they might have gone through.
2. I like how you have shed the light on the forerunners, as in them not being all benevolent gods but more like any other average race that's prone to mistakes.

Please keep up this great work, I look forward to further chapters and will R&R whenever i can.
12/4/2012 c3 9Qwerty282
Plausible melding of the different universes, most plot holes filled and genuine reactions to each scenario used. Overall, splendid work and I look forward to the next chapter.
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