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2ThePhantomismyLove
Thank you for all your comments and thank you for reading this work.
2ThePhantomismyLoveThank you for all your comments and thank you for reading this work.
10/21/2020 c1 ThePhantomismyLove
Dear Guest,
This is a fanfics, a make believe situation created by oneself about a fan created character to a fictional character and it has a place in the universe.
Dear Guest,
This is a fanfics, a make believe situation created by oneself about a fan created character to a fictional character and it has a place in the universe.
12/24/2013 c1 10twillandbonnie
This was truly amazing. It shows how she can't let go but she can leave. She isn't storng enough to forget but she's strong enough to go.
10twillandbonnieThis was truly amazing. It shows how she can't let go but she can leave. She isn't storng enough to forget but she's strong enough to go.
11/16/2013 c1 Guest
I'm sorry, but what does this have to do with Voldemort? Tom Riddle is a psychopath incapable of feeling any empathy or any of those normal feelings that human beings have. He also doesn't take women as lovers, he went solo and preferred to be solo.
Also, what does this have to do with the Harry Potter universe? It has nothing to do with the universe that JK Rowling created, thus it is an original poem not meant for this site.
Reported.
I'm sorry, but what does this have to do with Voldemort? Tom Riddle is a psychopath incapable of feeling any empathy or any of those normal feelings that human beings have. He also doesn't take women as lovers, he went solo and preferred to be solo.
Also, what does this have to do with the Harry Potter universe? It has nothing to do with the universe that JK Rowling created, thus it is an original poem not meant for this site.
Reported.
9/2/2013 c1 7EmeraldStorm7
this poem really portrays the war that is raging within herself right now, a constant fight between the reason in her mind and love within her heart.
really gripping
loved it
7EmeraldStorm7this poem really portrays the war that is raging within herself right now, a constant fight between the reason in her mind and love within her heart.
really gripping
loved it
6/15/2013 c1 5J. S. Armstrong
I like this one even better, especially because the OC is strong girl who has realised that she needs to leave him; and as Dumbledore would say "It is our choices, that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities..." and I guess at the end she made the right choice, even if it wasn't the easiest one, even if it pained her so much.
Excellent poem!
5J. S. ArmstrongI like this one even better, especially because the OC is strong girl who has realised that she needs to leave him; and as Dumbledore would say "It is our choices, that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities..." and I guess at the end she made the right choice, even if it wasn't the easiest one, even if it pained her so much.
Excellent poem!
2/18/2013 c1 6Gaia97
Very emotional, and very powerful! I love the shortness of the sentences, incredibly effective! Really inspirational as well :)
6Gaia97Very emotional, and very powerful! I love the shortness of the sentences, incredibly effective! Really inspirational as well :)
1/31/2013 c1 13Silwen Prince
"It's too much to let u go"- "you" go.
This is jarring! I was held at the end of my seat for all of it! The shortness of the lines are very emotional.
Cecilia's pain is quite evident and I can really feel her being torn.
"But I can't forget/Though I can leave."- This is...such a perfect ending; it shows how she's conflicted about going but also implies that she's hopeful and brave to do what's right. Grammar note: If you have "though" in a sentence, don't use "but as a starter." Or vice versa.
13Silwen Prince"It's too much to let u go"- "you" go.
This is jarring! I was held at the end of my seat for all of it! The shortness of the lines are very emotional.
Cecilia's pain is quite evident and I can really feel her being torn.
"But I can't forget/Though I can leave."- This is...such a perfect ending; it shows how she's conflicted about going but also implies that she's hopeful and brave to do what's right. Grammar note: If you have "though" in a sentence, don't use "but as a starter." Or vice versa.