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11/17/2017 c1 Isabella McFarlin
Good job!
12/8/2013 c1 2Sartjd1
I adore this. Its short but because of this it evokes a sort of unsettling haunting happiness that I can't quite accurately describe. I hope you'll write more like this in the future. I'd love to be able to read a series of short poetry alike to this but they seem to be extremely rare on here. Perhaps because they are very difficult to create, maybe? However I am fan of this. Its a rare jem, so please be motivated to create more :) Your very good at it.
8/10/2013 c1 Visitkarte
I can't believe I missed reviewing this. It's beautiful. Can't write more without revealing the story. Thank you.
2/14/2013 c1 29BabalooBlue
Oh, very poetic. I like the simplicity.
As for content - I like that you've picked up on the freedom the bike gives House. I've always thought that was the main attraction (apart from the 'fast & dangerous' quality) of the bike for him.
9/27/2012 c1 6Harry Artemis Jackson
Wow! Great, and you didn't clutter it with uneeded words. Beautiful.
9/24/2012 c1 CacauHousemaniaca
nice!
9/23/2012 c1 2EpicProblem
I like the simplicity of this. You managed to convey a very strong feeling with such few words. Bike Freedom. I enjoyed this. I like it indeed.

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