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4/6/2013 c1 102The North Wyn
Aww, poor babies. I kind of love Kono going to Malia and Malia being so protective of her. And the scene of Chin and Kono together was very sweet. Thanks for sharing!
10/11/2012 c1 Guest
I love this! I think you got the inner voice of Chin just right- he's not as cool on the inside, is he? I LOVE Chin and Kono stories and this one makes me realize how much I miss Malia as the big sister Kono really needs. I can't see anyone else filling that role. Certainly not Catherine. Also, I love Adam so I am glad you didn't make him entirely evil here, just sort of evil :)
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10/2/2012 c1 Guest
I'm suprised this has no review yet! I actually really liked it and even though i don't understand where it fits into the show it was good. I would love to read a continuous fanfic about Kono having a kid who 'has the full protection of Five-0 from the day it's born.' That could make for one extremely cute fanfiction! Really great for your first story :)
9/29/2012 c1 36francis2
I totally love this story, great perspective.

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