9/28/2012 c1 2vampdreams
Oh my God...!
it was soo. sweet
i adore it...
my only complain is that it was a one shot and not an entire story
but maybe that's its charm
its PERFECT...!
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Oh my God...!
it was soo. sweet
i adore it...
my only complain is that it was a one shot and not an entire story
but maybe that's its charm
its PERFECT...!
_
9/26/2012 c1 jkt7
Somewhat geeky Edward? Check. Fiesty Bella? Check. Quiet makeout spot? Double Check. Loved it. Especially the last sentence.
Somewhat geeky Edward? Check. Fiesty Bella? Check. Quiet makeout spot? Double Check. Loved it. Especially the last sentence.
9/25/2012 c1 Blue Moon
Great story, would have liked wfor Bella to have been more disgusted about his attempt with Tanya. Make him work a lot more for it. Maybe Jake could have started sitting next to her. Would be a brilliant longer story. :-)
Great story, would have liked wfor Bella to have been more disgusted about his attempt with Tanya. Make him work a lot more for it. Maybe Jake could have started sitting next to her. Would be a brilliant longer story. :-)