
11/23/2012 c6
4grimkat
Great action scene! :3 And looks like Allen is part death-wishing, part ninja. Wooh!

Great action scene! :3 And looks like Allen is part death-wishing, part ninja. Wooh!
10/20/2012 c5 grimkat
Haha, Allen has herself a mighty fine temper. And Sterling's doing good, and has herself a eevee! Nothing wrong that I noticed, good job!
Haha, Allen has herself a mighty fine temper. And Sterling's doing good, and has herself a eevee! Nothing wrong that I noticed, good job!
10/9/2012 c3 grimkat
xP Steven, huzzah!
Great job, I've got nothing much to say :P Haha, overrated super computer. Loved that especially.
You did a whole lot better with the enter and paragraph, just a tiny bit more, I swear. Then its practically perfect.
Rare candy spamming :D
xP Steven, huzzah!
Great job, I've got nothing much to say :P Haha, overrated super computer. Loved that especially.
You did a whole lot better with the enter and paragraph, just a tiny bit more, I swear. Then its practically perfect.
Rare candy spamming :D
10/7/2012 c2 grimkat
Ah! Good chapter, although the paragraphs are kinda lengthy. Thanks for the dedication, that was sweet of you. :3
Everything else was great.
I loved Allen/Teal and Monti and Tea. xD Goodness, you portrayed them swell.
Ah! Good chapter, although the paragraphs are kinda lengthy. Thanks for the dedication, that was sweet of you. :3
Everything else was great.
I loved Allen/Teal and Monti and Tea. xD Goodness, you portrayed them swell.
9/27/2012 c1 grimkat
Interesting. I like it! If you need help, or pointers, ect, pm me and I'd love to lend a hand. The story sounds like it could be really nice and beautiful!
Interesting. I like it! If you need help, or pointers, ect, pm me and I'd love to lend a hand. The story sounds like it could be really nice and beautiful!
9/26/2012 c1
5jayfeatherelle
This seems like a really interesting idea... I would love to read more about it.
Although, I feel like you should seperate the paragraph, and space it out. It's a little daunting to read.

This seems like a really interesting idea... I would love to read more about it.
Although, I feel like you should seperate the paragraph, and space it out. It's a little daunting to read.