
9/28/2012 c1
15Fangking2
I just started to watch Campion for this fic, but wow...That Light Novel/Anime is complex becauyse they go beyond standard myth. They dig up every scrap to make sense. I wonder how you will handle this.

I just started to watch Campion for this fic, but wow...That Light Novel/Anime is complex becauyse they go beyond standard myth. They dig up every scrap to make sense. I wonder how you will handle this.
9/28/2012 c1 Rybalov
Very Good)
Nice to see one fanfic on Campione!)
I hope for a speedy fun continued)
Very Good)
Nice to see one fanfic on Campione!)
I hope for a speedy fun continued)
9/28/2012 c1
3Tamult
Wow, rather interesting. I'll look forward to seeing how everything works. (So, this Shirou can not only be a Saber, Archer, Berserker and a horrid Caster; but a decent Lancer, Rider, and Avenger)
Wouldn't Shiro be able to gain a reality marble as well? Considering he still is a horribly warped human? How horrible is it going to be if Shiro meets/summons King Arthur here in attempt to meet Arturia? Also, poor Medusa.

Wow, rather interesting. I'll look forward to seeing how everything works. (So, this Shirou can not only be a Saber, Archer, Berserker and a horrid Caster; but a decent Lancer, Rider, and Avenger)
Wouldn't Shiro be able to gain a reality marble as well? Considering he still is a horribly warped human? How horrible is it going to be if Shiro meets/summons King Arthur here in attempt to meet Arturia? Also, poor Medusa.
9/27/2012 c1
6Alex T. Wallman
This seems rather interesting, I think I'll keep an eye on it.
So far as my thoughts on the story, you explained the reason for what happened to cause Shirou and Illya to arrive in the Campione!verse well enough, but I do wonder as to the fate of Sakura…
Secondly, because of 'Curses Without End' does Shirou have the ability to sling about Grail Mud?
Third, Shirou's eternally active Authourity… That basically means that Shirou is going to attract some many woman because it combined with his GAR/BAR/Gland, you do realize that, right?
I think I'll have to do some research into Campione! though, it sounds like a good place to send Situations!Shirou.

This seems rather interesting, I think I'll keep an eye on it.
So far as my thoughts on the story, you explained the reason for what happened to cause Shirou and Illya to arrive in the Campione!verse well enough, but I do wonder as to the fate of Sakura…
Secondly, because of 'Curses Without End' does Shirou have the ability to sling about Grail Mud?
Third, Shirou's eternally active Authourity… That basically means that Shirou is going to attract some many woman because it combined with his GAR/BAR/Gland, you do realize that, right?
I think I'll have to do some research into Campione! though, it sounds like a good place to send Situations!Shirou.
9/27/2012 c1 Condor green
I could see why Hades would think Shirou was an abomination.
Would really have preferred to see these scenes fleshed out instead of just summarized, they sound really bad-ass.
It is my hope that you start the actual story with Shirou dropping into this world but I feel I'll enjoy this regardless.
Can't wait for more.
I could see why Hades would think Shirou was an abomination.
Would really have preferred to see these scenes fleshed out instead of just summarized, they sound really bad-ass.
It is my hope that you start the actual story with Shirou dropping into this world but I feel I'll enjoy this regardless.
Can't wait for more.
9/27/2012 c1
1JinzoMask656
It seems really interesting! Always wonder who's reality marble was better shirou's or goudo's I mean they both look the same except one uses a blue spacial background while the other is a horizon with a sun set...they both even have a hill...lol well this is definitely something i want to see more of. I like the authorities that you gave him. Although one of the major event for Godou was to defeat perseus im curious to see how you get Lilliana with Godou, since that was the reason he ensnared her into his harem. Please keep it up! and thanks for the great read...

It seems really interesting! Always wonder who's reality marble was better shirou's or goudo's I mean they both look the same except one uses a blue spacial background while the other is a horizon with a sun set...they both even have a hill...lol well this is definitely something i want to see more of. I like the authorities that you gave him. Although one of the major event for Godou was to defeat perseus im curious to see how you get Lilliana with Godou, since that was the reason he ensnared her into his harem. Please keep it up! and thanks for the great read...
9/27/2012 c1 blakraven66
So...with Hades' power, does this mean he's gonna summon the servants in the HGW?
So...with Hades' power, does this mean he's gonna summon the servants in the HGW?
9/27/2012 c1 GVN.Chaos
Ah...Campione! My favorite light novel. Finally someone wrote a fanfic for this, and a crossover with a great verse, no less. I can't wait to see how it turn out
By the way, I hope you get your data from Campione! novel, not anime. Anime Campione! is ...well, crappy. Novel is much better.
Another information that defeated a weaken god do NOT give your their authorities. This happened when Doni defeated Perseus after his battle with Godou. No one gains any Authorites. So I don't think killed Angra Mainyu gives Shirou any benefit, since you said this is a suicidal attack on a weaken enemy. Of course, if you can properly explain everything (ie where the hell is hades come from) in the next chapter, I'm all in.
That's all. Good luck!
Ah...Campione! My favorite light novel. Finally someone wrote a fanfic for this, and a crossover with a great verse, no less. I can't wait to see how it turn out
By the way, I hope you get your data from Campione! novel, not anime. Anime Campione! is ...well, crappy. Novel is much better.
Another information that defeated a weaken god do NOT give your their authorities. This happened when Doni defeated Perseus after his battle with Godou. No one gains any Authorites. So I don't think killed Angra Mainyu gives Shirou any benefit, since you said this is a suicidal attack on a weaken enemy. Of course, if you can properly explain everything (ie where the hell is hades come from) in the next chapter, I'm all in.
That's all. Good luck!