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for Reading The Last Olympian With a very differnt twist

6/15 c1 1Rogue Shinigami
Lol ezio my favorite game series
2/27 c8 1TaliaAppiah
2/27 c4 TaliaAppiah
percabeth is just the best ship and really your book is showing it like all the other relationships failed but percabeth in that one she died can't really fail there
2/27 c3 TaliaAppiah
wh-wha-wha-wha-wha, Annie is dead so I can assume hoo didn't happen at all or what?
2/27 c3 TaliaAppiah
ex wife?, Artemis, WHERE I
9/4/2021 c8 XyroDoggs52
Still Arty, even if Percy DID cheat on you you should confront him not cheat on him. You did wrong, you deserved your punishment.

Also Aphrodite, that wasn't very lovely of you. I would want to stick a knife in your neck but since this is not canon (thankfully otherwise Annie would be dead) I can't.
5/15/2021 c1 Cassie
I don't know what the Assassins creed is. Won't affect the reading much, l hope?
4/28/2021 c1 Guest
Wait, I'm just guessing here and this is the first chapter, so I may be completely wrong, but is the ex-wife of Percy, Athena?
3/29/2021 c17 Guest
It was a really good story you should’ve continued I would have loved to read to the end
3/25/2021 c3 Guest
Wow that was really stupid. If this is the level of intelligence the rest of your characters show, I’m going to lose interest really quickly.
3/8/2021 c17 Guest
Good. Don’t write any more. You truly suck at it. Hopefully you might have talent in a completely unrelated field.
3/8/2021 c11 Guest
So how’s this? And this applies to every single stupid cliched story we’re someone keeps repeating, let me explain. How about instead of repeating such a stupid useless phrase that nobody will ever listen too, how about you just fucking explain. Don’t say “let me explain!” You fucking say “Aphrodite charm forced me to cheat!” Problem fucking solved. But no. Every writer has to pull the same retarded cliched bullshit that makes no sense. Fucking morons every single stupid writer who pulls such stupid brainless idiocy. It’s not good writing unless your characters are actually supposed to be stupid.
2/9/2021 c17 backbiter14
update or let me adopt it
9/14/2020 c17 Perseus
Please update, this story is more than epic.
4/26/2020 c3 Guest
Me again from saying there can only be 12 Olympians and percy cant be god of tjme based off mythology.
This writings terrible. If it was a original piece many a 4-5/10 If I'm being generous, instead this is a fanfiction. A fanfiction where the charectors are nothing like Riordan's and people from actual mythology dont match that either
Sorry if I'm being rude but ugh I've had 3 brain aneurysms reading this story.
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