for Reading The Last Olympian With a very differnt twist9/28/2012 c1 eskman
verry interesting a few grammatical problemes but you've got my attention keep up the good work
verry interesting a few grammatical problemes but you've got my attention keep up the good work
9/28/2012 c1 
6PercyxThalia Should Be Canon
The Grammar and puncuation was not good. Not flaming just advice.
6PercyxThalia Should Be CanonThe Grammar and puncuation was not good. Not flaming just advice.
9/28/2012 c1 27it makes sense in context
lolz. percy, god of time and space. where did he park his tardis?
27it makes sense in contextlolz. percy, god of time and space. where did he park his tardis?
9/27/2012 c1 19Anime Princess
You are alluding to Poseidon cheating on Amphitrite and Percy with Percy's wife...Artemis?! WTF?! I don't think I can read this simply because that is COMPLETELY OUT of the current characteristics of Poseidon
19Anime PrincessYou are alluding to Poseidon cheating on Amphitrite and Percy with Percy's wife...Artemis?! WTF?! I don't think I can read this simply because that is COMPLETELY OUT of the current characteristics of Poseidon
9/27/2012 c1 artemis godess of hunt moon
So far good but can you pls not put random capital letters in the middle of the sentence
So far good but can you pls not put random capital letters in the middle of the sentence