for Rebellion of a Mary Sue5/15/2013 c1 vjthbvieurdfgai
This is bloody brilliant! Where did you get those Sue's from. You made me google search what the character typed!
This is bloody brilliant! Where did you get those Sue's from. You made me google search what the character typed!
10/9/2012 c1 
38Calyn
I nth the continuation idea. The only thing that bugs me is that I was planning a story like this too. Phooey.
38CalynI nth the continuation idea. The only thing that bugs me is that I was planning a story like this too. Phooey.
10/6/2012 c1 3Gaia was Framed
YOU. MUST. CONTINUE. THIS. It is the funniest, truest, and most relevant Narnia fic I have ever read. In the next chapter(s), maybe Katie's Sue-powers should attract Peter and Edmund and she'll have to disable them too.
I couldn't agree with you more. I'm not opposed to canon/OC pairings on principle like some people, but so many Sues pass themselves off as mere OCs, and the Narnia fandom especially is rife with them. Before reading this story I was recovering from a particularly bad Edmund/OC fic I had stumbled upon. Anyway.
We need more stories like this! Please write more!
GwF
3Gaia was FramedYOU. MUST. CONTINUE. THIS. It is the funniest, truest, and most relevant Narnia fic I have ever read. In the next chapter(s), maybe Katie's Sue-powers should attract Peter and Edmund and she'll have to disable them too.
I couldn't agree with you more. I'm not opposed to canon/OC pairings on principle like some people, but so many Sues pass themselves off as mere OCs, and the Narnia fandom especially is rife with them. Before reading this story I was recovering from a particularly bad Edmund/OC fic I had stumbled upon. Anyway.
We need more stories like this! Please write more!
GwF
10/2/2012 c1 Sugarplum Fairy911
The only thing I don't like about this story is the question mark on the end of 'To Be Continued'. After getting over my initial shock (grammar isn't extinct, yay!) I found this chapter very enjoyable and look forward to reading more. Just be careful you don't fall into the trap of feeling too sorry for yourself, it has a tendency to annoy the reader (me) and make the jokes less funny, which would be a shame, because so far it's pretty hilarious. Something you might use in the next chapter: all Mary Sue writers can't spell the word 'definitely'. They will all 'defiantly' meet their twoo loves tomorrow night. And trust me, that's only funny the first 5 times.
The only thing I don't like about this story is the question mark on the end of 'To Be Continued'. After getting over my initial shock (grammar isn't extinct, yay!) I found this chapter very enjoyable and look forward to reading more. Just be careful you don't fall into the trap of feeling too sorry for yourself, it has a tendency to annoy the reader (me) and make the jokes less funny, which would be a shame, because so far it's pretty hilarious. Something you might use in the next chapter: all Mary Sue writers can't spell the word 'definitely'. They will all 'defiantly' meet their twoo loves tomorrow night. And trust me, that's only funny the first 5 times.
9/30/2012 c1 Strawberry MM
Ideas..uh, I know! She runs into the rest of the gang, and Edmund and Peter both fall in love with her, um, Susan hates her guts because she's "taking away from Sue's beauty," Lucy's her little follower acolyte who does everything she says or Lucy also hates her, she is constantly being kidnapped, which is annoying to say the least, Aslan thinks she's "The One" of some stupid prophesy and is somehow his distant relative, which I don't get, caus he's a lion, and Mr. Tumnus falls in love with her too, though how he's alive is beyond me, and so this is all very annoying and the Authoress gets very mad and in the very end Katie must defeat her in a battle of rationality and spelling. I don't know. But keep writing!
Ideas..uh, I know! She runs into the rest of the gang, and Edmund and Peter both fall in love with her, um, Susan hates her guts because she's "taking away from Sue's beauty," Lucy's her little follower acolyte who does everything she says or Lucy also hates her, she is constantly being kidnapped, which is annoying to say the least, Aslan thinks she's "The One" of some stupid prophesy and is somehow his distant relative, which I don't get, caus he's a lion, and Mr. Tumnus falls in love with her too, though how he's alive is beyond me, and so this is all very annoying and the Authoress gets very mad and in the very end Katie must defeat her in a battle of rationality and spelling. I don't know. But keep writing!
9/30/2012 c1 marysuehater
Love the story ! Definitely had me laughing (:
Love the story ! Definitely had me laughing (:
9/30/2012 c1 Guest
Make it longer! I love the concept! I hate Mary Sues and I love making fun of them!
Make it longer! I love the concept! I hate Mary Sues and I love making fun of them!