
9/30/2015 c1
202hollyhobbit101
That part about going by Mrs Williams broke my heart completely. It sort of signifies a proper end to their travels with the Doctor.

That part about going by Mrs Williams broke my heart completely. It sort of signifies a proper end to their travels with the Doctor.
7/23/2013 c2
22Kina Kalamari
The first chapter was decent, but this second one really took the cake. You did a wonderful job. And I — who am in fact a River fan — would never have guessed that you weren't. You managed her voice well and didn't taint the story with your opinions, so good on you.
This was sad and heartwarming and just generally a lovely read. Thank you. :)

The first chapter was decent, but this second one really took the cake. You did a wonderful job. And I — who am in fact a River fan — would never have guessed that you weren't. You managed her voice well and didn't taint the story with your opinions, so good on you.
This was sad and heartwarming and just generally a lovely read. Thank you. :)
1/4/2013 c2 Guest
Melancholy ending, but well written and I enjoyed a little bit more elucidation on the matter. Thanks for writing it.
Melancholy ending, but well written and I enjoyed a little bit more elucidation on the matter. Thanks for writing it.
10/4/2012 c2
5ChasingYou
The ending still made me feel sad. But if I'm honest, I'm glad they got a proper goodbye. After everything, they deserve a proper goodbye. Again, thank you for writing this. It is absolutely amazing!

The ending still made me feel sad. But if I'm honest, I'm glad they got a proper goodbye. After everything, they deserve a proper goodbye. Again, thank you for writing this. It is absolutely amazing!
10/4/2012 c1 ChasingYou
Oh, this was truly amazing! I can't get over how truly amazing this was. I was crying when I watched the Angels take Manhattan, but this just made it all a little better. Thank you for writing this!
Oh, this was truly amazing! I can't get over how truly amazing this was. I was crying when I watched the Angels take Manhattan, but this just made it all a little better. Thank you for writing this!
10/3/2012 c2
2MusicCompletesMeTKD
This was an amazing story! I was so sad after TATM and felt like they never did get a proper goodbye. This was definitely a believable ending that I feel is much happier. Thank you. :)

This was an amazing story! I was so sad after TATM and felt like they never did get a proper goodbye. This was definitely a believable ending that I feel is much happier. Thank you. :)
10/3/2012 c2
13PrincessAndula
Wouldn't have known that you didn't adore River if you hadn't said so. Thanks for the happy ending.

Wouldn't have known that you didn't adore River if you hadn't said so. Thanks for the happy ending.
10/3/2012 c2 Kimmerv2
Thank you! Finally someone addressed the whole vortex manipulator taking 2 people to the past issue. I bad remembered that offer the Doctor made to Rory also in that episode and wondered why they didn' t just use that to visit them. Lovely story. Great work.
Thank you! Finally someone addressed the whole vortex manipulator taking 2 people to the past issue. I bad remembered that offer the Doctor made to Rory also in that episode and wondered why they didn' t just use that to visit them. Lovely story. Great work.
9/30/2012 c1
81steelneena
Of all the ones like this that I've read - and there are a lot of them already - this one is my favourite.

Of all the ones like this that I've read - and there are a lot of them already - this one is my favourite.