for Saving Grace8/17/2015 c3 Cat
I like this, I'm new to fanfic but you did a great job at setting the scenes. Keep up the good work!
I like this, I'm new to fanfic but you did a great job at setting the scenes. Keep up the good work!
8/6/2015 c21 
6The Ginger Midget
Hey! After seeing Jurassic World, it's nice to get back to the original. ;) Haha. Anyway, I liked that you showed what both characters where thinking; I wasn't expecting that and it added an extra demention. My only complaint was that we didn't see the discussion between Ian and Grace before she left, or the discussion between Grace and Robert. While I liked being inside their heads, I would have liked to see these conversations first hand. Anyway, I'm still enjoying this, and I'm excited to see how you end this. Keep up the good work!
6The Ginger MidgetHey! After seeing Jurassic World, it's nice to get back to the original. ;) Haha. Anyway, I liked that you showed what both characters where thinking; I wasn't expecting that and it added an extra demention. My only complaint was that we didn't see the discussion between Ian and Grace before she left, or the discussion between Grace and Robert. While I liked being inside their heads, I would have liked to see these conversations first hand. Anyway, I'm still enjoying this, and I'm excited to see how you end this. Keep up the good work!
7/27/2015 c20 Elvenrose22
Loving this story so far! Make him sweat it! Make Ian worry about her, maybe do some deep thinking. Doesn't have to hit a whole solution yet, just something small. Just my opinion, but either way I'm loving this story!
Loving this story so far! Make him sweat it! Make Ian worry about her, maybe do some deep thinking. Doesn't have to hit a whole solution yet, just something small. Just my opinion, but either way I'm loving this story!
7/26/2015 c20 5PhanPhicAddict
Yay you updated again! I hope Alyssa goes to help I think ian would protest like crazy say her dad will never forgive him if anything where to happen to her,heck he would't forgive himself but I think she needs tooshe needs to be more than the damsel in destress sitting like a good girl and let the men work. Hope to read more soon!
5PhanPhicAddictYay you updated again! I hope Alyssa goes to help I think ian would protest like crazy say her dad will never forgive him if anything where to happen to her,heck he would't forgive himself but I think she needs tooshe needs to be more than the damsel in destress sitting like a good girl and let the men work. Hope to read more soon!
7/14/2015 c20 6The Ginger Midget
I love the anti-climax at the beginning. As for the question, I would kind of like to see Ian put his foot down. He seems pretty easy-going concerning what Alyssa does; it would be interesting to see what happens when she doesn't get her way. Keep up the good work!
6The Ginger MidgetI love the anti-climax at the beginning. As for the question, I would kind of like to see Ian put his foot down. He seems pretty easy-going concerning what Alyssa does; it would be interesting to see what happens when she doesn't get her way. Keep up the good work!
7/14/2015 c20 Chaospossum
AHHHHHHH! Oh my god. I can't wait for the next chapter! Also, I have no idea tbh. I'll love whatever you write so... Yeah. Ahah. Xx
AHHHHHHH! Oh my god. I can't wait for the next chapter! Also, I have no idea tbh. I'll love whatever you write so... Yeah. Ahah. Xx
7/13/2015 c20 CelticDireWolf
I reckon she should argue with Ian but eventually leave the bunker with Ellie and Robert. BTW absolutely loving this story!
I reckon she should argue with Ian but eventually leave the bunker with Ellie and Robert. BTW absolutely loving this story!