
7/9/2015 c19 Chaospossum
Oh my god! I love this story so damn much! It's so believable that when I was watching the movie earlier, I half expected Alyssa to pop up in some of the scenes. I love the way that you've caught the way Ian speaks perfectly. When he talks, I can hear his voice in my head which makes it all the better! I've never seen an Ian story where the love interest is his assistant which helps make the story more independent and unique. I am super pumped for the next chapter! Update soon? Xx
Oh my god! I love this story so damn much! It's so believable that when I was watching the movie earlier, I half expected Alyssa to pop up in some of the scenes. I love the way that you've caught the way Ian speaks perfectly. When he talks, I can hear his voice in my head which makes it all the better! I've never seen an Ian story where the love interest is his assistant which helps make the story more independent and unique. I am super pumped for the next chapter! Update soon? Xx
6/26/2015 c19
9Love.Fiction.2023
Sad that it's getting closer to the end. Do you have any plans for a sequel?

Sad that it's getting closer to the end. Do you have any plans for a sequel?
6/25/2015 c19
6The Ginger Midget
Again, nice job building up the suspense. It seemed that some action was skipped at the beginning of the chapter, but since the movie is well known, I was able to pick it up right away. Not bad so far.

Again, nice job building up the suspense. It seemed that some action was skipped at the beginning of the chapter, but since the movie is well known, I was able to pick it up right away. Not bad so far.
6/24/2015 c18 andimcd2000
This is just FANTABULOUS! Keep up the good work! Update soon, please and thank you!
This is just FANTABULOUS! Keep up the good work! Update soon, please and thank you!
6/23/2015 c18 PhanPhicAddict
I really hope you update soon I just found your story today and had to read all of it! I have had a crush on Ian's character since I saw the first film when I was 4 lol I probably got my dry humor him from watching the first two films about a million times hope to read more soon!
I really hope you update soon I just found your story today and had to read all of it! I have had a crush on Ian's character since I saw the first film when I was 4 lol I probably got my dry humor him from watching the first two films about a million times hope to read more soon!
6/23/2015 c18
6The Ginger Midget
I'm glad that you gave us a chance to really get inside Alyssa's head. It's kind of refreshing to take a moment to step back from the action of the story and give us a breather. The ending line is great too.

I'm glad that you gave us a chance to really get inside Alyssa's head. It's kind of refreshing to take a moment to step back from the action of the story and give us a breather. The ending line is great too.
6/18/2015 c17
9Love.Fiction.2023
Another good chapter. I can't wait for more. Ian and Alyssa are so incredibly cute:)

Another good chapter. I can't wait for more. Ian and Alyssa are so incredibly cute:)
6/18/2015 c17
6The Ginger Midget
The last line was great. You're doing a good job of tying everything together. Keep up the good work!

The last line was great. You're doing a good job of tying everything together. Keep up the good work!