for Saving Grace6/10/2015 c15 
1lizziecats
I love this story, I can't wait for the next update!
I really like Alyssa and to be honest I don't judge her at all for freezing up in that situation. I mean it completely understandable the way she reacted to such a terrifying situation. You can't expect someone whose never witnessed such carnage to just up and about take action like nothings wrong. Alyssa may not have done anything thing time around but I'm sure as this story continues that she will have time or moment where she can prove herself not that Ian would be happy if she put herself in harms way.
I love the relationship between Alyssa and Ian. I personally don't care about the age gap since I believe that love has no bounds and that the heart wants what the heart wants. Also there's good chemistry between them so if they truly do get together I don't see her becoming the next ex Mrs. Malcolm. Personally I’d like to think that this ordeal will help strengthen there relationship since it will force them to trust and rely on one another like they've never had to before as they try to survive this nightmare.
Anyway like I said in the beginning I love this story and I really am looking forward to the next update lol I want you to know that I appreciate all the hard work, time and dedication you have put into creating and developing this story. I know how hard it is to write something like this and I know that it takes time and patience to create each new chapter. I just want you to know that I really appreciate all that you've done to make this story as incredible and enjoyable as it has been for me so far lol
THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON, THIS STORY IS SIMPLY TO AMAZING TO BE LEFT UNFINISHED, I SIMPLY MUST KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT AND SO ON UNTIL THE VERY LAST CHAPTER!
I WOULD TRULY BE UPSET IF THIS STORY WAS LEFT UNFINISHED WHEN I AM SO COMPLETELY ADDICTED TO IT AND REALLY WISH TO READ MORE LOL
SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE CAUSE I WOULD BE SO DISAPPOINTED IF THIS STORY WERE NOT TO CONTINUE TILL THE END! :(
1lizziecatsI love this story, I can't wait for the next update!
I really like Alyssa and to be honest I don't judge her at all for freezing up in that situation. I mean it completely understandable the way she reacted to such a terrifying situation. You can't expect someone whose never witnessed such carnage to just up and about take action like nothings wrong. Alyssa may not have done anything thing time around but I'm sure as this story continues that she will have time or moment where she can prove herself not that Ian would be happy if she put herself in harms way.
I love the relationship between Alyssa and Ian. I personally don't care about the age gap since I believe that love has no bounds and that the heart wants what the heart wants. Also there's good chemistry between them so if they truly do get together I don't see her becoming the next ex Mrs. Malcolm. Personally I’d like to think that this ordeal will help strengthen there relationship since it will force them to trust and rely on one another like they've never had to before as they try to survive this nightmare.
Anyway like I said in the beginning I love this story and I really am looking forward to the next update lol I want you to know that I appreciate all the hard work, time and dedication you have put into creating and developing this story. I know how hard it is to write something like this and I know that it takes time and patience to create each new chapter. I just want you to know that I really appreciate all that you've done to make this story as incredible and enjoyable as it has been for me so far lol
THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON, THIS STORY IS SIMPLY TO AMAZING TO BE LEFT UNFINISHED, I SIMPLY MUST KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT AND SO ON UNTIL THE VERY LAST CHAPTER!
I WOULD TRULY BE UPSET IF THIS STORY WAS LEFT UNFINISHED WHEN I AM SO COMPLETELY ADDICTED TO IT AND REALLY WISH TO READ MORE LOL
SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE CAUSE I WOULD BE SO DISAPPOINTED IF THIS STORY WERE NOT TO CONTINUE TILL THE END! :(
5/31/2015 c15 6The Ginger Midget
Wow. You really dug deep into Ian's mind, and I liked that. It showed us a different side of him. You did this really well.
6The Ginger MidgetWow. You really dug deep into Ian's mind, and I liked that. It showed us a different side of him. You did this really well.
5/29/2015 c14 The Ginger Midget
This is well done. I like how Ian is still relatively non-chalant about the entire thing. Great work!
This is well done. I like how Ian is still relatively non-chalant about the entire thing. Great work!
5/28/2015 c14 9Love.Fiction.2023
Wow! This was great! Can't wait for the next one. I wonder where you will put Alyssa now. Will she get separated with Ian and go with Alan and the kids or stay with Ian?! Please update soon.
9Love.Fiction.2023Wow! This was great! Can't wait for the next one. I wonder where you will put Alyssa now. Will she get separated with Ian and go with Alan and the kids or stay with Ian?! Please update soon.
5/19/2015 c12 6The Ginger Midget
Hello! It's good to see you back! Of course I forgive you; I have a few stories of my own that are in a terrible need of an update. As for Beta Readers, you should be able to search for them under the menu tab "Betas." If that doesn't work, you could just ask around. :)
It's great to read your stuff again!
6The Ginger MidgetHello! It's good to see you back! Of course I forgive you; I have a few stories of my own that are in a terrible need of an update. As for Beta Readers, you should be able to search for them under the menu tab "Betas." If that doesn't work, you could just ask around. :)
It's great to read your stuff again!
5/15/2015 c11 Guest
I love this please continue! :D
I love this please continue! :D
12/31/2014 c11 emobunnyninja
I love your fanfic and i can't wait to see what's gonna happen to Alyssa when the velociraptors and T-Rexes get out! Please continue on with your story! Thanks for writing! xoxo ;)
I love your fanfic and i can't wait to see what's gonna happen to Alyssa when the velociraptors and T-Rexes get out! Please continue on with your story! Thanks for writing! xoxo ;)