for A Tragic Tale, Of A Special Irken11/28/2015 c1 Guest
You spelled pain wrong its pain not pain
You spelled pain wrong its pain not pain
11/2/2012 c8 BurgerHat
Yet another another awesome chapter! U so epic! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Yet another another awesome chapter! U so epic! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
10/11/2012 c5 
17Julius Night
Really good fic so far, great angle for a fic and way to keep it interesting. Great work!
17Julius NightReally good fic so far, great angle for a fic and way to keep it interesting. Great work!
10/4/2012 c2 1j158n
And that kids is why you always listen to your wife or pain and torture awaits I know from experience!
1j158nAnd that kids is why you always listen to your wife or pain and torture awaits I know from experience!
10/3/2012 c1 26Define Me
I really like the idea, but your format is all wrong! Start a new line when people are talking. Always. Also, you might want to start making paragraphs, no one likes to read fanfics that are jumbled together. Anyway, I think you should continue it, it's a great story, but please take my advice if you want to make it more popular. Maybe also change the summary to something a little more...not how it is. Suspenseful, is the word. People love suspense.
26Define MeI really like the idea, but your format is all wrong! Start a new line when people are talking. Always. Also, you might want to start making paragraphs, no one likes to read fanfics that are jumbled together. Anyway, I think you should continue it, it's a great story, but please take my advice if you want to make it more popular. Maybe also change the summary to something a little more...not how it is. Suspenseful, is the word. People love suspense.