for I want to know you8/22/2013 c1 jas
I... loove.. thiiissss!
I... loove.. thiiissss!
5/14/2013 c1 
40Concolor44
Good vignette. This drop-the-reader-into-the-action methodology you have is very effective. Probably not as effective as Violet's direct approach will be on Mirage, but still ...
I like your work. A lot.
40Concolor44Good vignette. This drop-the-reader-into-the-action methodology you have is very effective. Probably not as effective as Violet's direct approach will be on Mirage, but still ...
I like your work. A lot.
5/4/2013 c1 5magusxamus
I like it nice and angsty I just suggest spaces between the paragraphs otherwise it becomes a wall o text and that is not easy on the eyes.
5magusxamusI like it nice and angsty I just suggest spaces between the paragraphs otherwise it becomes a wall o text and that is not easy on the eyes.
1/3/2013 c1 3DaddyJusticeXL
Whoa so good :D I really liked it and damn who wouldn't want to see Mirage as a super? And I mean come on,she'll get to wear a costume. Imagine..Miragesupersuit(often tight!) huuuuge fandom :D
3DaddyJusticeXLWhoa so good :D I really liked it and damn who wouldn't want to see Mirage as a super? And I mean come on,she'll get to wear a costume. Imagine..Miragesupersuit(often tight!) huuuuge fandom :D