
3/7/2015 c1
4ready4more
That was great! I love the character and feel sympathetic towards her. It was a sweet start, good way to begin this, I can't wait to read more!

That was great! I love the character and feel sympathetic towards her. It was a sweet start, good way to begin this, I can't wait to read more!
1/11/2013 c5 Nowhere.Everywhere
awwwwww im soooo sorry tht ur not gonna write anymore :'(... i really did like it esspecially this story... *sigh* well... still...think at me like a friend and a ''supporter'' in ur studies kay'? Good Luck and hope ur gonna start writing again!
With love,
Petalia ;3
awwwwww im soooo sorry tht ur not gonna write anymore :'(... i really did like it esspecially this story... *sigh* well... still...think at me like a friend and a ''supporter'' in ur studies kay'? Good Luck and hope ur gonna start writing again!
With love,
Petalia ;3
10/28/2012 c3 sclover
YAY! Luv it so far! Please update SOON! LIKE SOOOOOOONNNNN!
YAY! Luv it so far! Please update SOON! LIKE SOOOOOOONNNNN!
10/13/2012 c2 mon juchami
terminalo pro con el mismo cap 3
terminalo pro con el mismo cap 3
10/6/2012 c1 Miyabi Maeko
this is...
AWESOME
this is...
AWESOME
10/2/2012 c1
1Moki X
It sounds like a used topic, but of you put some twists it'll be good.
It's fine right now, sounds like the Rima we know. The only things were you added emoticons for some reason and the chapter didn't really end properly.
It has potential, if you don't go by the cliche storyline. Good luck, and continue as soon as possible!
- Moki

It sounds like a used topic, but of you put some twists it'll be good.
It's fine right now, sounds like the Rima we know. The only things were you added emoticons for some reason and the chapter didn't really end properly.
It has potential, if you don't go by the cliche storyline. Good luck, and continue as soon as possible!
- Moki