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9/14/2014 c1 yuiyuki
Awwww..I love this!
12/12/2012 c1 Reviewer
You're a pretty good writer. However instead of doing things like
M: Hi Camille
C: Hi Moose
You should do things like:
"Hi Camille!" Moose greeted excitedly. "Hey Moose!" Camille replied grinning.
Other than that, it's really good! (:
11/18/2012 c1 Guest
Do you even know how to write dialogue?
10/3/2012 c1 BustYourWindows
I have to say I love all your stories! They are amazing! :))

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