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12/2/2012 c1 charmice
You go Mandy!

I loved it! Especially the last line. Wonderful, wonderful writing.

-Haley
10/31/2012 c1 1i-am-turk-fear-me
Wow the General gets his ass kicked alot.
10/11/2012 c1 1StoneStrikeAlchemist
One particular thing I enjoy about new show fanfics is that you can portray the characters any way you want and still make it work. I like the way you've decided to interpret the characters, and can't wait to read future installments. It's pretty cool that you are working with the Nickname's plot. :)

Keep up the great work!
10/10/2012 c1 AWarCommence
Lol I absolutely love this!
10/3/2012 c1 203Gotham Siren
Yay, it's up!

Jeeze. Did Mandy really come off that vicious? That's awesome, though. *snickers* Sebby, you'll just have to deal with your kitty cat.

A few quibbles though: "The Rebels trampled her fields that she'd worked so hard..." shouldn't "on" be at the end of that? Or am I missing something? And you have "peak" instead of "peek".

Poor Mandy. *huggles her* Never mess with her hair. She's quite fond of it; I liked how you put in the snippets of the first three months. And of course it would end with them sleeping together. This is Savid we're talking about. *snickers*

All in all, I really enjoyed this. Thanks for writing it! Hopefully this'll get others to read Nicknames and Wasted. :)

-Orwell

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