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8/19/2019 c1 Guest
Gracias, gran trabajo.
4/27/2017 c1 4Dragon VS Phoenix
too fast, some build-up would be nice, though using so much exposition is kinda bad, might want to tone down the whole "we went there and everything was awesome" in essence, the story has a good premise, though where you intend to take it is kinda vague, but it is a story without depth, if you get what i mean.
1/7/2017 c1 2King Quinn Of Tucky
Update now
9/6/2015 c1 Lovnag
Well, the course of actions is at the very least interesting. I don't reaaly like how you dealt with all the troubles(in a way) from MGS, but, I suppose, Big Boss now has a massive headache. Still, very interesting. I would love to see more.
6/13/2014 c1 ZERO
No chapter 2 yet?
7/24/2013 c1 Cylon One
Sure got my interest.

Sure hope you still doing this.

It's a good start and I wish to see what goes on with those of Metal Gear beyond this.
6/5/2013 c1 9DrakenSword0z
you had my curiosity now you have my attention! you still doing this?!
3/7/2013 c1 18The Last Order
I personally want to see more of this story and hope you will eventually post a new chapter
12/10/2012 c1 2U.N.S
looks good but need to see more
11/14/2012 c1 Ema3str0
How Will big boss gonna deal with a world filled with magic.
10/29/2012 c1 2revan193
Frankly, I really like this idea. It's very rare to find good Metal Gear stories (Crossovers or not), you've created a great fic idea. :)

But to have a definitive opinion on this fic I need to see more chapters, I hope you will update soon.
10/15/2012 c1 KnightyNight
Wow, I have to say this is well made, I love it already. XD Still though, MSF is supposed to be an Army Without Borders so unless you're going to be off from that this means that the so-called "Tristain" in which Queen Henrietta rules should not count on MSF becoming an ally anytime soon because it would kinda deteriorate the very meaning of MSF I think. ;
10/11/2012 c1 The nameless hero
This is have potential because is original
10/9/2012 c1 1NekoRomancer000
I found the sentences to be a tad redundant. "Quickly tilting the plane to the right and suddenly dropping his speed, the plane that the boy was piloting was able to get behind his pursuers who were three fire dragons with their riders on them." In my opinion, it would be best if you didn't outright state anything about the riders. It just seems redundant. Great, now I'm repeating myself. Anyway, I would try to either give more details or go the minimalist approach. Be careful about making everything unbalanced. Also, I think I know Frank Jeager's codename.
10/5/2012 c1 2Ulydace
Bringing in MSF in FoZ?
haha...this is just epic! You're just gonna dump in there the MGS pack?

The pack includes:
-Big Boss himself
-A shitload of tanks, APCs, destroyers and choppers.
-A plethora of modern weaponry.
-Army of insanely dangerous soldiers that could shoulder the weight of Cocoon.
-Metal Gear Zeke
-Zeke loaded with a Nuke
Last, but not the least...
the WHOLE fucking BASE of MSF
-Outer Heaven

how does sticks, dragons, and sharp, pointy metal objects deal with gatling guns, missiles, and a huge-ass robot of the Apocalpyse.

Halkegenia will tremble...
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