9/27/2013 c3 12Tsukiko Lily
Ahh, so nice to see this again! I love the way you write Ray in this... You're doing a good job at presenting him as... Well, just a bit unstable. ; Which is a compliment; I love that in fic.
Ahh, so nice to see this again! I love the way you write Ray in this... You're doing a good job at presenting him as... Well, just a bit unstable. ; Which is a compliment; I love that in fic.
10/5/2012 c1 Rari
I definitely agree with you, Ray is really creepy. That's why I like him so much.
To be honest, the first time I read this I got to the part about the mock weddings and quit because I was laughing too hard. Then a while later I'm back and I want to see where this goes. A lot.
I definitely agree with you, Ray is really creepy. That's why I like him so much.
To be honest, the first time I read this I got to the part about the mock weddings and quit because I was laughing too hard. Then a while later I'm back and I want to see where this goes. A lot.
10/5/2012 c1 Tsukiko Lily
Ooh, this is interesting! I'd love to read more. Ray never struck me as creepy, personally, but I LOVE it when people write Rune Factory characters as being creepy, or just having a dark side in general. And Creepy Ray DOES sound like great fun indeed. ;
I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Ooh, this is interesting! I'd love to read more. Ray never struck me as creepy, personally, but I LOVE it when people write Rune Factory characters as being creepy, or just having a dark side in general. And Creepy Ray DOES sound like great fun indeed. ;
I am looking forward to the next chapter!