for Of Monsters And Gods3/22/2013 c7 Guest
Awesome work! Update please!
Awesome work! Update please!
12/22/2012 c7 guest
I loved these chapters! They were totally cool! That is one original idea. Good work!
P.S Sometimes the pronouns are getting mixed up. So it's like Percy is saying them instead of the monster. Other than that i appreciate what you've done.
I loved these chapters! They were totally cool! That is one original idea. Good work!
P.S Sometimes the pronouns are getting mixed up. So it's like Percy is saying them instead of the monster. Other than that i appreciate what you've done.
12/14/2012 c7 Epicness12344321
I like how you divided the Chimera into two brains and made them so different I never would have thought of that!
I like how you divided the Chimera into two brains and made them so different I never would have thought of that!
12/12/2012 c7 eragon0123
This one was weird. I totally feel as if my IQ just dropped a couple of points. Nice work though. Looking forward to more chapters.
P.S. Glad to have you back and updating.
This one was weird. I totally feel as if my IQ just dropped a couple of points. Nice work though. Looking forward to more chapters.
P.S. Glad to have you back and updating.
10/22/2012 c4 guest
Oh, please update! I really love this.
Very original(wish I had thought of this...) Good job!
Oh, please update! I really love this.
Very original(wish I had thought of this...) Good job!
10/20/2012 c4 Hope Lost
Awesome! I've never seen anything like this before- it's very original and creative. However, there were a few points in the fourth chapter that made it sound as if Percy were telling it, because you used 'her' instead of 'me' or 'I'. Great job, though, I love it!
Awesome! I've never seen anything like this before- it's very original and creative. However, there were a few points in the fourth chapter that made it sound as if Percy were telling it, because you used 'her' instead of 'me' or 'I'. Great job, though, I love it!
10/20/2012 c1 Guest
please update! this is so original and creative, and the pov's of the monsters all make sense! UPDATE! :)
please update! this is so original and creative, and the pov's of the monsters all make sense! UPDATE! :)
10/20/2012 c4 Guest
please update!
please update!
10/20/2012 c4 
1LordOfFigaro
Dude this is amazing. i can actually imagine the monsters thinking of all this as they fight. so please continue writing and update soon
1LordOfFigaroDude this is amazing. i can actually imagine the monsters thinking of all this as they fight. so please continue writing and update soon
10/14/2012 c3 guest
I love this story! Great job!
I love this story! Great job!
10/13/2012 c2 eragon0123
That was actually pretty good. I would love to see these chapters get longer with the more 'intelligent' monsters.
That was actually pretty good. I would love to see these chapters get longer with the more 'intelligent' monsters.