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4/30/2016 c1 1Pushi19
Update please
4/11/2013 c1 35Potterformers
Not quite a chapter, more a preface to a prolog
10/6/2012 c1 Wing-Gundamknight100
dude, Harry acting like Magishine? Cool
10/6/2012 c1 12Maloran
Nice variation, but has no flow, no set-up, just climax after climax in a big, jumbled run-on sentence. Your main issues here are the sense of time and the sense of reason... it has neither. Harry's not going to learn how to use his powers in one day. And although my version is just Harry dealing with Wizard's problems, I still gave him enough time to discover and train from when I first said he was kidnapped to when he was shown in the story. The main thing I would recommend is to study other fics, the properly written ones. Study how the sentences and paragraphs are set, how they describe things, how events build up and resolve. Now, if you'll excuse me, I need to finish chapter two.

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