for A Call of Destiny
192/22/2017 c4 gbamouraxx
please update I want to read more of this because this is very good and interesting so, please continue and update.
please update I want to read more of this because this is very good and interesting so, please continue and update.
7/21/2013 c4 guest reader
love it! Hope you update soon!
love it! Hope you update soon!
3/8/2013 c3 Ghost
Well, you've certainly done your research, and I like how you're using the book!universe :) The movies were good, but I love the books so much more.
This is a good start, although this chapter was a bit of an infodump and it might have been better if you'd described the scenes happening as Anna saw them.
I'm also interested in learning more about the character of Anna. As an OFC (original female character) she runs the risk of becoming a Mary Sue although I'm sure you know all about this already.
Not sure if Eru had a physical body, but I'm willing to accept some artistic license. And I like your description of the Halls of Eru :)
Keep it up!
Well, you've certainly done your research, and I like how you're using the book!universe :) The movies were good, but I love the books so much more.
This is a good start, although this chapter was a bit of an infodump and it might have been better if you'd described the scenes happening as Anna saw them.
I'm also interested in learning more about the character of Anna. As an OFC (original female character) she runs the risk of becoming a Mary Sue although I'm sure you know all about this already.
Not sure if Eru had a physical body, but I'm willing to accept some artistic license. And I like your description of the Halls of Eru :)
Keep it up!
2/25/2013 c4 09sasha
You have my attention if I'm honest I'm undecided how good this will be but recognise the potential for brilliance.
You have my attention if I'm honest I'm undecided how good this will be but recognise the potential for brilliance.
2/25/2013 c4 breneke87
Great chapter and looking forward to the next one! I hope you didn't take offense in my last review. I understand you needed to include that information after reading this chapter. :)
Great chapter and looking forward to the next one! I hope you didn't take offense in my last review. I understand you needed to include that information after reading this chapter. :)
2/24/2013 c4 GalateaStatue
Awesome chapter! I I didn't catch the hints so I'm going to go back and read :) looking forward to the next update.
Awesome chapter! I I didn't catch the hints so I'm going to go back and read :) looking forward to the next update.
2/14/2013 c3 Julian
Not only this chapter, but all of them. I love it Lor [:)]...Keep up the good work...
Not only this chapter, but all of them. I love it Lor [:)]...Keep up the good work...
1/28/2013 c3 Guest
Pleaaaaassssseeeeee update!
Pleaaaaassssseeeeee update!
1/24/2013 c3 guest reader
hope you update soon.
hope you update soon.
1/6/2013 c3 pink penguins
interesting continue i want to know what happens next
interesting continue i want to know what happens next