for After The Fall11/14/2012 c9 
5Eternal Evening
Amazing. Walking and talking like that-exactly what the show would look like. I wish I could write show fanfics like you can!
5Eternal EveningAmazing. Walking and talking like that-exactly what the show would look like. I wish I could write show fanfics like you can!
11/14/2012 c8 Eternal Evening
Hey, It's me, I'm back! Will with angst-loving it! He's always so sure of himself that It's (almost sadistically) heartwarming to see him hesitating when it comes to Alicia . There's hardly anything one can do in such a situation though is there. Reading and reviewing the next chapter soon! :D
Hey, It's me, I'm back! Will with angst-loving it! He's always so sure of himself that It's (almost sadistically) heartwarming to see him hesitating when it comes to Alicia . There's hardly anything one can do in such a situation though is there. Reading and reviewing the next chapter soon! :D
11/14/2012 c12 Koxxy
Fantastic writing and wonderful attention to detail - you know your characters well! Thanks so much for writing this - I'm enjoying each chapter so much!
Fantastic writing and wonderful attention to detail - you know your characters well! Thanks so much for writing this - I'm enjoying each chapter so much!
11/14/2012 c11 Amy
I have been reading this for a while but I haven't reviewed before and for that I am sorry because if there is a story that truely deserves a review it is this one. The finesse you use to wave between dialogue and decriptions are amazing.
The chapter where Will wondered if he should send the email or not, was probably some of the best writting I have ever come across.
What is even more impressive is that you have managed to write a story seen from Will's point and still haven't made Peter look like a complet jerk which must be so hard, because there truely are no excusses for what he did to Alicia. But instead of going down that road you had a chapter where you at the end of hinted that Will actually could understand why.
This latest chapter the part with the phone call to get Alicia away from those people was truely sweet.
I am very sorry to read at the end of this chapter that we are getting closer to the end of this story, however I have huge hopes of seeing more of your works in the furture.
I have been reading this for a while but I haven't reviewed before and for that I am sorry because if there is a story that truely deserves a review it is this one. The finesse you use to wave between dialogue and decriptions are amazing.
The chapter where Will wondered if he should send the email or not, was probably some of the best writting I have ever come across.
What is even more impressive is that you have managed to write a story seen from Will's point and still haven't made Peter look like a complet jerk which must be so hard, because there truely are no excusses for what he did to Alicia. But instead of going down that road you had a chapter where you at the end of hinted that Will actually could understand why.
This latest chapter the part with the phone call to get Alicia away from those people was truely sweet.
I am very sorry to read at the end of this chapter that we are getting closer to the end of this story, however I have huge hopes of seeing more of your works in the furture.
11/11/2012 c11 Emilie
I really enjoy reading your story! It's new, fresh and an angle that hasn't been written about before. As for this chapter precisely, my favorite moment has to be the phone call, that was so sweet!
I really enjoy reading your story! It's new, fresh and an angle that hasn't been written about before. As for this chapter precisely, my favorite moment has to be the phone call, that was so sweet!
11/11/2012 c11 Guest
It was so cute having him call her and get her out of there. And the "people bring me coffee" part was funny. Always love this story, keep up the good work.
It was so cute having him call her and get her out of there. And the "people bring me coffee" part was funny. Always love this story, keep up the good work.
11/9/2012 c10 Guest
So well done, I love it! The tie rotation bit was funny, and very in character!
So well done, I love it! The tie rotation bit was funny, and very in character!
11/8/2012 c10 LimeJuiceTub
I continue to look forward to each chapter of this story. It's very interesting looking at all the thoughts running through Will's head. I particularly enjoy the interactions between Will and Kalinda - very amusing!
I continue to look forward to each chapter of this story. It's very interesting looking at all the thoughts running through Will's head. I particularly enjoy the interactions between Will and Kalinda - very amusing!
11/5/2012 c9 BAC23
Omg i love him and you write him so Well! Great story :)
Omg i love him and you write him so Well! Great story :)
11/4/2012 c9 Guest
Really enjoying this story!
Really enjoying this story!
11/4/2012 c9 25pebblysand
I LOVE you. Like, really. I just... I was already adoring this to bits before but now it's... Everything you wrote and said in there about the show was just perfect. I loved Alicia's email because it's so faithful to her character, I loved the fact that you had Will contacting her first because everyone usually has her calling him out of the blue asking for a job and I've always felt this wasn't right, I loved the fact that they bonded over being reserved because it's just so *them* and most importantly I absolutely loved the way you drew the Will/Peter parallel and how even though Will says he doesn't really understand what Peter was looking for in Amber Madison, it's so clear that actually, he does, or at least part of him does, in a certain way. Not because he can understand the idea of cheating on Alicia but because in truth, peter and he do have a lot in common which is probably the reason Alicia has this relationship with the both of them. They are not only strong characters but are both gamblers at heart, fascinated by risk-taking and being the best. They do consider the consequences and how bad it would be to get caught but at the same time, the high from the thrill is never dragged down by the fear of consequences.
Anyway, I just honestly want to stress how much I appreciate this incredibly brilliant story of yours and cannot wait to read your next chapter!
25pebblysandI LOVE you. Like, really. I just... I was already adoring this to bits before but now it's... Everything you wrote and said in there about the show was just perfect. I loved Alicia's email because it's so faithful to her character, I loved the fact that you had Will contacting her first because everyone usually has her calling him out of the blue asking for a job and I've always felt this wasn't right, I loved the fact that they bonded over being reserved because it's just so *them* and most importantly I absolutely loved the way you drew the Will/Peter parallel and how even though Will says he doesn't really understand what Peter was looking for in Amber Madison, it's so clear that actually, he does, or at least part of him does, in a certain way. Not because he can understand the idea of cheating on Alicia but because in truth, peter and he do have a lot in common which is probably the reason Alicia has this relationship with the both of them. They are not only strong characters but are both gamblers at heart, fascinated by risk-taking and being the best. They do consider the consequences and how bad it would be to get caught but at the same time, the high from the thrill is never dragged down by the fear of consequences.
Anyway, I just honestly want to stress how much I appreciate this incredibly brilliant story of yours and cannot wait to read your next chapter!
11/4/2012 c9 Guest
So lovely, so well-written, so Will.
So lovely, so well-written, so Will.