
10/19/2012 c1
21ChildOfWisdom
Omg...So sweet it brought tears to my eyes.
My favorite two lines where:
" Even though we were falling to most likely our deaths, that thought filled me with relief. Maybe I could cushion her fall…"
And
""We'll figure it out. As long as we're together, we'll be alright."
I thought that Percy was just so sweet and you caught his personality so perfectly.
Remember when i told you, that you where a great author?
Yeah. This is what i mean.
Amazing!
Write more!

Omg...So sweet it brought tears to my eyes.
My favorite two lines where:
" Even though we were falling to most likely our deaths, that thought filled me with relief. Maybe I could cushion her fall…"
And
""We'll figure it out. As long as we're together, we'll be alright."
I thought that Percy was just so sweet and you caught his personality so perfectly.
Remember when i told you, that you where a great author?
Yeah. This is what i mean.
Amazing!
Write more!
10/18/2012 c1 cantwaitforHoH
Awwww! THat's sweet!
-"And if we have to close the door on the Tartarus side, that means one of us has to stay here...Only one of us can escape."-
I've been thinking about that. Based on Percy's character, Percy is probaly going to be all honorable and stuff. The romantic part of me is saying "They love eachother to much to be seperated! After all, that was the whole point of falling together, right?!If one of them has to stay, they both will!"
Awwww! THat's sweet!
-"And if we have to close the door on the Tartarus side, that means one of us has to stay here...Only one of us can escape."-
I've been thinking about that. Based on Percy's character, Percy is probaly going to be all honorable and stuff. The romantic part of me is saying "They love eachother to much to be seperated! After all, that was the whole point of falling together, right?!If one of them has to stay, they both will!"
10/16/2012 c1
8NeverWillGrowUp
I love this! Is this a one-shot? Cuz I want u to continue so badly if u can!

I love this! Is this a one-shot? Cuz I want u to continue so badly if u can!
10/14/2012 c1 Guest
LOVETHISSOMUCH! Btw I read your House of Hades fanfic and I love it! Veronica's an awesome idea! OCs tend to ruin stories, but you're doing great with Veronica!
LOVETHISSOMUCH! Btw I read your House of Hades fanfic and I love it! Veronica's an awesome idea! OCs tend to ruin stories, but you're doing great with Veronica!
10/13/2012 c1
14Lycii
Nicee (: Please don't be a one-shot. What happens next? *Eager face* Reading fanfics eases the pain. LoL

Nicee (: Please don't be a one-shot. What happens next? *Eager face* Reading fanfics eases the pain. LoL
10/8/2012 c1 Guest
AWESOME! :) I love this! this better not be a one-shot!
AWESOME! :) I love this! this better not be a one-shot!
10/8/2012 c1 Guest
awesome! I read your house of hades fanfic too, and it's amazing :)
awesome! I read your house of hades fanfic too, and it's amazing :)