for The House of Hades12/1/2012 c15 Guest
can you post 10 more chapters plz
can you post 10 more chapters plz
12/1/2012 c15 G.C
great work
great work
11/30/2012 c15 Guest
hi..i create ebooks..mind if i use this?
hi..i create ebooks..mind if i use this?
11/29/2012 c15 Guest
write more already
write more already
11/29/2012 c2 Guest
nice
nice
11/29/2012 c5 JS
how about in nico's to keep the fans reading
how about in nico's to keep the fans reading
12/1/2012 c15 
3HazellevesqueSPQR
guilty Nico moment! PS Stop Picking on Nico, every-one! all of the fanfics I have read have something to do with making Nico feel guilty!:) keep writing,its good!:):#)
3HazellevesqueSPQRguilty Nico moment! PS Stop Picking on Nico, every-one! all of the fanfics I have read have something to do with making Nico feel guilty!:) keep writing,its good!:):#)
11/26/2012 c15 MidnaRocks1000
So. Freaking. Amazing.
So. Freaking. Amazing.
11/26/2012 c15 Guest
nice chapter! love it! veronica sound so nice...
nice chapter! love it! veronica sound so nice...
11/26/2012 c15 deleted2017
Ooh. The twondemigods I'd failed to save. Thats a very good sentence! Alright, criticism: Veronica and nico got into a fight in 0.3 seconds flat. Maybe draw out the suspense ad bit more? yeah, that's it. Thanks! Great chapter!
Ooh. The twondemigods I'd failed to save. Thats a very good sentence! Alright, criticism: Veronica and nico got into a fight in 0.3 seconds flat. Maybe draw out the suspense ad bit more? yeah, that's it. Thanks! Great chapter!
11/25/2012 c15 Brianna
AWESOME! That is the best fan fiction I have every read, even better than my own, and I have read almost every posted story ever for this book. So that is saying a lot. MORE VERONICO! Why haven't they started dating yet? Also, nemesis is the goddes of revenge. She would not make that big of a mistake. I am sorry if I sound like a little kid, pointing out every little thing, but I am planning on being a... Oh I forgot what it is called. It is where you read good books, and diside what will be in the movie and what will not. You have to pay attention to every little detail. Anyway, please answer my questions,
Thank you,
Brianna I Simpson
(P.S. sorry about the letter format, I am practicing for a test like crazy, and sometimes I slip into it at random times!)
AWESOME! That is the best fan fiction I have every read, even better than my own, and I have read almost every posted story ever for this book. So that is saying a lot. MORE VERONICO! Why haven't they started dating yet? Also, nemesis is the goddes of revenge. She would not make that big of a mistake. I am sorry if I sound like a little kid, pointing out every little thing, but I am planning on being a... Oh I forgot what it is called. It is where you read good books, and diside what will be in the movie and what will not. You have to pay attention to every little detail. Anyway, please answer my questions,
Thank you,
Brianna I Simpson
(P.S. sorry about the letter format, I am practicing for a test like crazy, and sometimes I slip into it at random times!)
11/25/2012 c1 Eline
Loved it! Keep writing, I want to read the follow chapters!
Loved it! Keep writing, I want to read the follow chapters!
11/25/2012 c15 Grace
Nice! I've been reading your story since the day you started, and I've got to say, you're pretty amazing. When you first mentioned adding Veronica to the story, I said NO WAY, SHE'LL RUIN THE STORY. But you managed to add her to the story without ruining it. I'm going to be sad when she's not in the actual House of Hades next fall :(
Nice! I've been reading your story since the day you started, and I've got to say, you're pretty amazing. When you first mentioned adding Veronica to the story, I said NO WAY, SHE'LL RUIN THE STORY. But you managed to add her to the story without ruining it. I'm going to be sad when she's not in the actual House of Hades next fall :(