
10/9/2012 c2 Guest
Great story :) update soon as possible!
Great story :) update soon as possible!
10/8/2012 c2
1Izzy910
Happy Thanksgiving to you too. P
That was an amazing story, so I suppose I'm thankful for that. It's not how I pictured Rick writing it, but it really is a lovely story, or beginning. I can see in my mind's eye the singing and the mourning while Percy and Annabeth have landed at last in Tartarus.
Please, keep writing. )

Happy Thanksgiving to you too. P
That was an amazing story, so I suppose I'm thankful for that. It's not how I pictured Rick writing it, but it really is a lovely story, or beginning. I can see in my mind's eye the singing and the mourning while Percy and Annabeth have landed at last in Tartarus.
Please, keep writing. )
10/8/2012 c2 daughter-of-magic
GAHHH UPDATE! (sorry, very impatient...) btw this is awesome so far XD
GAHHH UPDATE! (sorry, very impatient...) btw this is awesome so far XD
10/8/2012 c1 WiseGirl
I'm not exactly sure what jacques landry (guest) means by "Annabeth never calls Percy seaweed brain that many times a chapter" since Annabeth only called him Seaweed Brain once... anyways, you're an amazing writer! continue! I'll be waiting for chapter 3 ;) (btw WRITE SOMETHING IN NICO'S PERSPECTIVE! PLEASE?)
I'm not exactly sure what jacques landry (guest) means by "Annabeth never calls Percy seaweed brain that many times a chapter" since Annabeth only called him Seaweed Brain once... anyways, you're an amazing writer! continue! I'll be waiting for chapter 3 ;) (btw WRITE SOMETHING IN NICO'S PERSPECTIVE! PLEASE?)
10/8/2012 c2 person
awesome story please continue it.
awesome story please continue it.
10/8/2012 c2 Guest
this is beautiful :) UPDATE ASAP!
this is beautiful :) UPDATE ASAP!
10/8/2012 c2 Guest
UPDATE! Its a great story!
UPDATE! Its a great story!
10/8/2012 c2 NA
That was a great chapter! It was very sweet.
That was a great chapter! It was very sweet.
10/8/2012 c1 jacques landry
I do not think that this was good. You need to improve your writing style. And Annabeth never calls Percy seaweed brain that many times a chapter.
I do not think that this was good. You need to improve your writing style. And Annabeth never calls Percy seaweed brain that many times a chapter.
10/8/2012 c1 PJO Fan
I'm thankful for my family, art, and fanfiction. Happy Thanksgiving! This is really good, keep writing!
I'm thankful for my family, art, and fanfiction. Happy Thanksgiving! This is really good, keep writing!
10/8/2012 c1 Guest
this is good, CONTINUE :D
this is good, CONTINUE :D