for Awaken, Noblesse8/30 c11 GHETTOKINGKAI
yeah i initially thought this story was great and had some very well thought out character building for the first few chapters and it seemed like you wouldve made it an all around well rounded and badass story, but with all of the goofy childish antics and obnoxious sex jokes and harem pairing focused stuff it pretty much fell flat after that. I personally wouldve much rather seen ichigo be more serious than you made him and overall not have unnecessary exposition in these later chapters either. Also kukaku as his main pairing either just feels a bit wrong to me as well. Incest is not my thing in any type of fiction and despite them being distant cousins, ichigo shouldve had someone like yoruichi or even someone other than kukaku as a main pairing and i also wouldve much preferred this to not be a massive harem style story, maybe 2 girls at the most wouldve been cool with me, but overall this story had great potential but just falls short with all the childish shit tbh
yeah i initially thought this story was great and had some very well thought out character building for the first few chapters and it seemed like you wouldve made it an all around well rounded and badass story, but with all of the goofy childish antics and obnoxious sex jokes and harem pairing focused stuff it pretty much fell flat after that. I personally wouldve much rather seen ichigo be more serious than you made him and overall not have unnecessary exposition in these later chapters either. Also kukaku as his main pairing either just feels a bit wrong to me as well. Incest is not my thing in any type of fiction and despite them being distant cousins, ichigo shouldve had someone like yoruichi or even someone other than kukaku as a main pairing and i also wouldve much preferred this to not be a massive harem style story, maybe 2 girls at the most wouldve been cool with me, but overall this story had great potential but just falls short with all the childish shit tbh
5/6 c11 Guest
So after 10 years and no update either something happen or gave up on this ?
So after 10 years and no update either something happen or gave up on this ?
1/18/2021 c11 Guest
Omg please update this story. Its amazing!
Omg please update this story. Its amazing!
6/14/2020 c11 
1Alexand Morgan
Hey wassup. I have reread this several times now and it is always a joy to read. Thank you for sharing it with us. I find myself disappointed it was never taken further but such is life. I hope all is well with you and yours.
1Alexand MorganHey wassup. I have reread this several times now and it is always a joy to read. Thank you for sharing it with us. I find myself disappointed it was never taken further but such is life. I hope all is well with you and yours.
5/16/2020 c2 1MysticRising
... exposition. Fucking exposition. The bane of all stories if done incorrectly.
1MysticRising... exposition. Fucking exposition. The bane of all stories if done incorrectly.
3/17/2020 c11 Bond James Bond
Can you please update this I die laughing whenever I read a chapter and it’s freaking hilarious.
Can you please update this I die laughing whenever I read a chapter and it’s freaking hilarious.