for Lethal8/9/2017 c1 senrence
amazing. love
amazing. love
8/1/2017 c1 Guest
Im baling my eyes out
Im baling my eyes out
1/1/2017 c1 Guest
Goddamn, that was really good. I was shedding a few tears at the end. Definitely saving this to my favorites!
Goddamn, that was really good. I was shedding a few tears at the end. Definitely saving this to my favorites!
1/1/2017 c1 BetaForRent5465
I hate it when a story makes me cry and you did it. This is only the second work I've read of ours but they've both been fantastic. I really love the input from the characters point of view that you add in. It makes the empathy hit hard though. Anyways great job, keep writing your doing amazing and if you ever need a beta for any of your works hit me up :)
I hate it when a story makes me cry and you did it. This is only the second work I've read of ours but they've both been fantastic. I really love the input from the characters point of view that you add in. It makes the empathy hit hard though. Anyways great job, keep writing your doing amazing and if you ever need a beta for any of your works hit me up :)
4/28/2016 c1 
10WatchingTheWatchman
Gorgeous, incredibly sad story! I love the powerful emotions that you've put into this; it made me want to cry. It's such a depressing topic, but you've done a great job handling it well. Beautiful oneshot!
10WatchingTheWatchmanGorgeous, incredibly sad story! I love the powerful emotions that you've put into this; it made me want to cry. It's such a depressing topic, but you've done a great job handling it well. Beautiful oneshot!
11/13/2015 c1 2Midori no Kaori
This really shook me to the core. Not in a bad way but in a good way. It really made me think of a lot of things. Especially when you delve into grimmjows head and how his reaction changes and progresses as he nears his execution. And the way you narrate and describe the story, the thought process, absolutely stunning and just very deep and moving. I dont have enough words to describe about how i feel but seriously, this is a very VERY exellent fic. All i can say us that if its you portraying some emotions you had, it was definitely expressed well, and i believe to be very accurate : )
Haha sorry for the wordy review. Though i want to ask if i can download this somehow? Because i want to reread this in my own time, even when i dont have internet haha.
Also, this would be incredible if you got someone to voice act this out, like a monolugue only, not actual acting, but have them show the miniscual detail in each aentence. Id totally buy it!
I hope ill be able to read more of your wonderful fics!
Cheers!
2Midori no KaoriThis really shook me to the core. Not in a bad way but in a good way. It really made me think of a lot of things. Especially when you delve into grimmjows head and how his reaction changes and progresses as he nears his execution. And the way you narrate and describe the story, the thought process, absolutely stunning and just very deep and moving. I dont have enough words to describe about how i feel but seriously, this is a very VERY exellent fic. All i can say us that if its you portraying some emotions you had, it was definitely expressed well, and i believe to be very accurate : )
Haha sorry for the wordy review. Though i want to ask if i can download this somehow? Because i want to reread this in my own time, even when i dont have internet haha.
Also, this would be incredible if you got someone to voice act this out, like a monolugue only, not actual acting, but have them show the miniscual detail in each aentence. Id totally buy it!
I hope ill be able to read more of your wonderful fics!
Cheers!
9/26/2015 c1 Nicole
Oh, God. I just, have no words. I mean, you totally put those dark feelings inside me, but you did it in such a beautiful way. My heart is broken, but somehow healed. And I'm thinking about so many things about my own life, because I felt I was Grimmjow, I felt like if my own life was coming to an end. I got desperate while I was reading, and my heart was twitching with sadness and fear. You sure did an amazing job putting those feelings out of your head, and I accept your apologizes, because you completely put them into me.
Congratulations, it's a great fic.
And I promise, I will keep it in my memory for a long time.
Best regards from Venezuela 3
Oh, God. I just, have no words. I mean, you totally put those dark feelings inside me, but you did it in such a beautiful way. My heart is broken, but somehow healed. And I'm thinking about so many things about my own life, because I felt I was Grimmjow, I felt like if my own life was coming to an end. I got desperate while I was reading, and my heart was twitching with sadness and fear. You sure did an amazing job putting those feelings out of your head, and I accept your apologizes, because you completely put them into me.
Congratulations, it's a great fic.
And I promise, I will keep it in my memory for a long time.
Best regards from Venezuela 3
7/29/2015 c1 26Brassica
I have mixed feelings about the death penalty. In one hand I support it because if someone was able to kill in cold blood and hurt other people, then that person deserves the same, even worst. But on the other hand I also know that the system is not always right and innocent people end up dying or in prison for the rest of their life.
However, Grimmjow killed a pregnant woman. Yes, he was only following orders. In his head he repeated the mantra "she dies, or I die" but I think that doesn't justify his actions in any way. There is always another way out, another answer, but he decided to kill her.
Of course, that doesn't mean that I don't feel sympathy for him. For indeed, it must be hard that one day someone comes and tells you "you will die in two months" and they even ask "when you die, what do you want us to do with your body?" I think the system does it on purpose. Tell prisoners they will die long before it occurs, so that the guilt and despair kill their spirit. And it should work. It can even be used as psychological torture. Get up every morning and think "one day less to die" or "I'm going to die today. It's over."
Clearly it worked with Grimmjow. Because after all, he regretted killing her.
And while it doesn't change anything, I think that despite everything, Grimmjow didn't die alone. Ichigo was there until the last moment, showing him compassion.
It was intense, and that is an understatement.
I have no right words to express how much I liked it.
The kiss even didn't seem rushed or exaggerated to me, it was the perfect touch. In those moments Grimmjow was just a man desperate for warmth, for affection. Because fear and anxiety were killing him.
Thank you for this.
26BrassicaI have mixed feelings about the death penalty. In one hand I support it because if someone was able to kill in cold blood and hurt other people, then that person deserves the same, even worst. But on the other hand I also know that the system is not always right and innocent people end up dying or in prison for the rest of their life.
However, Grimmjow killed a pregnant woman. Yes, he was only following orders. In his head he repeated the mantra "she dies, or I die" but I think that doesn't justify his actions in any way. There is always another way out, another answer, but he decided to kill her.
Of course, that doesn't mean that I don't feel sympathy for him. For indeed, it must be hard that one day someone comes and tells you "you will die in two months" and they even ask "when you die, what do you want us to do with your body?" I think the system does it on purpose. Tell prisoners they will die long before it occurs, so that the guilt and despair kill their spirit. And it should work. It can even be used as psychological torture. Get up every morning and think "one day less to die" or "I'm going to die today. It's over."
Clearly it worked with Grimmjow. Because after all, he regretted killing her.
And while it doesn't change anything, I think that despite everything, Grimmjow didn't die alone. Ichigo was there until the last moment, showing him compassion.
It was intense, and that is an understatement.
I have no right words to express how much I liked it.
The kiss even didn't seem rushed or exaggerated to me, it was the perfect touch. In those moments Grimmjow was just a man desperate for warmth, for affection. Because fear and anxiety were killing him.
Thank you for this.
5/11/2015 c1 6Koujii
I'm against the death penalty. I'm against it because I feel like no one should control whether a person lives or dies. This story is really well written, so much that honestly, it made me think about the two Australians that were executed in Bali recently. People do change, and regret, and look back on their lives after its too late. The fact that you made a real situation and a work of fiction relate is powerful. It's saddening, but this story was really worth the read. I didn't want to have an emotional connection with Grimmjow, but some scenes made me anxious because I knew what was going to happen like he did. It got me thinking for a while even after finishing it.
Thanks for writing it.
-K.
6KoujiiI'm against the death penalty. I'm against it because I feel like no one should control whether a person lives or dies. This story is really well written, so much that honestly, it made me think about the two Australians that were executed in Bali recently. People do change, and regret, and look back on their lives after its too late. The fact that you made a real situation and a work of fiction relate is powerful. It's saddening, but this story was really worth the read. I didn't want to have an emotional connection with Grimmjow, but some scenes made me anxious because I knew what was going to happen like he did. It got me thinking for a while even after finishing it.
Thanks for writing it.
-K.
2/27/2015 c1 2Baka Kage Usagi
When I read the ending my body it seemed, was imitating Grimmjow's. When I got to the end I let out a big breath only for my heart to freeze and then I felt emensly sad that Grimmjow was delt such a horrible hand. That he never got to meet Ichi before he was incarcerated and I felt for him. This hit me deep. Thank you for posting this.
2Baka Kage UsagiWhen I read the ending my body it seemed, was imitating Grimmjow's. When I got to the end I let out a big breath only for my heart to freeze and then I felt emensly sad that Grimmjow was delt such a horrible hand. That he never got to meet Ichi before he was incarcerated and I felt for him. This hit me deep. Thank you for posting this.
9/18/2014 c1 Guest
This is really sad...
It got me to sit down and think.
Do you think it possible to add a redo button...and save Grimm...maybe...?
Anyway, I really liked it!
This is really sad...
It got me to sit down and think.
Do you think it possible to add a redo button...and save Grimm...maybe...?
Anyway, I really liked it!
7/23/2014 c1 wittlewons
I cried my face off. Oh my gosh. I can't BELIVE how well written how heart wrenching this was. Your an excellent writer. This will haunt me forever. I love it.
I cried my face off. Oh my gosh. I can't BELIVE how well written how heart wrenching this was. Your an excellent writer. This will haunt me forever. I love it.