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3/26/2016 c1 Guest
I think the user FlashofReality said most of what I had to say, but I have another thing to add. It's a bit of a pet peeve as all stories that end up doing what I'm about to address, unless there is signifigant and plot pivotal reason as to 'why', always evoke my ire. I'm talking about, of course, the altering of Saria's body. Yes, I can see the mental gymnastics already - hell, you already put it into your foreward your reason behind it - you claim the pedophilia aspect. Perhaps you, and the others who follow the example of changing her, just breezed through all the text in the game and played for the gameplay aspect alone. Why do I say that? It's simple; to be of pedophilic nature would mean there is an actual child involved. Now, the most obvious thing to point to in this is that the characters and story of Zelda are ALL FICTIONAL. They don't exist. However, I'll do you one better - it is made known, several times if you actually read into the story in the game regarding the mythos of the Kokiri that they are unaging and save for outside factors, immortal. That immortality is contingent upon them remining in their namesake woods, and in so doing, they do not appear to age. That means, though they appear as children, they are actually far older than what your mind perceives. Got it? There is no pedophilia here even if you kept her appearance as it was in the game. Just your own uncomfortablity with finding a character who's story and persona you like enough to fantasize about not matching what you know them to look like. Bah, I'm done ranting for now. This story was so-so, but hey it's PWP so I wasn't expecting much. Cheers.
I think the user FlashofReality said most of what I had to say, but I have another thing to add. It's a bit of a pet peeve as all stories that end up doing what I'm about to address, unless there is signifigant and plot pivotal reason as to 'why', always evoke my ire. I'm talking about, of course, the altering of Saria's body. Yes, I can see the mental gymnastics already - hell, you already put it into your foreward your reason behind it - you claim the pedophilia aspect. Perhaps you, and the others who follow the example of changing her, just breezed through all the text in the game and played for the gameplay aspect alone. Why do I say that? It's simple; to be of pedophilic nature would mean there is an actual child involved. Now, the most obvious thing to point to in this is that the characters and story of Zelda are ALL FICTIONAL. They don't exist. However, I'll do you one better - it is made known, several times if you actually read into the story in the game regarding the mythos of the Kokiri that they are unaging and save for outside factors, immortal. That immortality is contingent upon them remining in their namesake woods, and in so doing, they do not appear to age. That means, though they appear as children, they are actually far older than what your mind perceives. Got it? There is no pedophilia here even if you kept her appearance as it was in the game. Just your own uncomfortablity with finding a character who's story and persona you like enough to fantasize about not matching what you know them to look like. Bah, I'm done ranting for now. This story was so-so, but hey it's PWP so I wasn't expecting much. Cheers.
3/7/2015 c1 KnightyNight
Finally they get together, love this SO darn much, seriously...! 3 SaLink Forever! -
Finally they get together, love this SO darn much, seriously...! 3 SaLink Forever! -
10/13/2014 c1 anonymous
great story just what i was looking for :3
great story just what i was looking for :3
12/15/2013 c1 
197Danny vs A Month
This was good. Now I dare you to do one with saria and zelda "playing nurse" when they were kids. Now that would be a good PWP. Of course, you'd be free to include Link
197Danny vs A MonthThis was good. Now I dare you to do one with saria and zelda "playing nurse" when they were kids. Now that would be a good PWP. Of course, you'd be free to include Link
7/23/2013 c1 Guest
Very well-written, especially for a first! I really enjoyed it.
Very well-written, especially for a first! I really enjoyed it.
7/19/2013 c1 pussyliker
wheres the ass humpin'?
wheres the ass humpin'?
11/22/2012 c1 FlashofReality
She's a slut, he's a whore. No virtue nor chastity left for either of them, it seemed their actions were all based from lust rather than love. In this story, the word "love" is just a word rather than a feeling, I look down apon a man who can go from missing one girl who he claimed he had feelings for, and only minutes later is having sexual relations with another and immediately after, confesses to her that he loves her.
I know it's just a fic, but it was a disappointing fic. I can't read this without feeling dirty or like a pervert.
Though i admire your efforts in writing it, it was very well worded and very easy going and easy to read. If you have another story/novel without lust, I'll give it a shot.
She's a slut, he's a whore. No virtue nor chastity left for either of them, it seemed their actions were all based from lust rather than love. In this story, the word "love" is just a word rather than a feeling, I look down apon a man who can go from missing one girl who he claimed he had feelings for, and only minutes later is having sexual relations with another and immediately after, confesses to her that he loves her.
I know it's just a fic, but it was a disappointing fic. I can't read this without feeling dirty or like a pervert.
Though i admire your efforts in writing it, it was very well worded and very easy going and easy to read. If you have another story/novel without lust, I'll give it a shot.
11/18/2012 c1 Guest
() good job
() good job
10/22/2012 c1 20DarkKnights
Well, this was actually pretty good. Anyway, to notice, Link-x-Saria is my favorite couple.
I find a lot of potential in it. Keep it up & thanks. Hope you make a sequel, can't wait to see Link's child :)!
20DarkKnightsWell, this was actually pretty good. Anyway, to notice, Link-x-Saria is my favorite couple.
I find a lot of potential in it. Keep it up & thanks. Hope you make a sequel, can't wait to see Link's child :)!
10/14/2012 c1 Guest
One word can describe what i had during this... Fangasam... bout amillon and seven of em!
One word can describe what i had during this... Fangasam... bout amillon and seven of em!
10/13/2012 c1 BlazeBlu
This was perfect.
I demand sequal NOOOOOWWWWWW
MMMOOOOAAARRRR
But seriously, great story good detail
4.7 out of 5
Coulda been longer
This was perfect.
I demand sequal NOOOOOWWWWWW
MMMOOOOAAARRRR
But seriously, great story good detail
4.7 out of 5
Coulda been longer