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765Radiant Arabian Nights
Loved it!:)
Great work!
Really well written!:)
Glad you were able to finish it:)!
765Radiant Arabian NightsLoved it!:)
Great work!
Really well written!:)
Glad you were able to finish it:)!
8/12/2020 c8 Jessyca
Fairies and dancing, I am in love. I want to write my own Holmes and Baby story! I'm so inspired now and emotional.
Fairies and dancing, I am in love. I want to write my own Holmes and Baby story! I'm so inspired now and emotional.
8/12/2020 c6 Jessyca
Honestly, I'm not even halfway through and I'm crying so much! This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read.
Honestly, I'm not even halfway through and I'm crying so much! This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read.
8/12/2020 c3 Jessyca
Oh, my goodness! How is it possible to feel both happy and sad at the same time? This made me cry, especially the part where he played the violin for the baby, that was so sweet. I can't wait to read more.
Oh, my goodness! How is it possible to feel both happy and sad at the same time? This made me cry, especially the part where he played the violin for the baby, that was so sweet. I can't wait to read more.
12/8/2019 c23 Calliope
Don't forget your story! Watson may die before you can get back to your keyboard!
Don't forget your story! Watson may die before you can get back to your keyboard!
10/2/2019 c23 James Birdsong
Good five chapters
Good five chapters
1/30/2019 c18 Elwnn
Hi, I'm reading your fic with great pleasure, and as I just finished chapter 18, I wanted to help you with the French. "Come back to me my brother", was right, however when you repeated "come back", you should have said "revenez", as it is an imperative form. You said "revenir", which is the infinitive form, "to come back".
And also, there are to types of second person in French (to ways to say "you"). There are "tu" and "vous". The second, which you chose to use, can be used when you speak either to two or more people, or when you speak to only one person but that you respect /don't know well / has a higher rank than you. "Tu" is for only one person, who can be a friend, a family member, or a child, etc...
I'd say "vous" to a teacher or someone I ask for direction in a street, while I say "tu" to my friends, my brother...
(Some families make children say "vous" to their parents but that's rather uncommon).
So, in this case, you can very well choose to use "vous", but if you prefer "tu" it goes like "Reviens à moi, mon frère. Reviens."
Hi, I'm reading your fic with great pleasure, and as I just finished chapter 18, I wanted to help you with the French. "Come back to me my brother", was right, however when you repeated "come back", you should have said "revenez", as it is an imperative form. You said "revenir", which is the infinitive form, "to come back".
And also, there are to types of second person in French (to ways to say "you"). There are "tu" and "vous". The second, which you chose to use, can be used when you speak either to two or more people, or when you speak to only one person but that you respect /don't know well / has a higher rank than you. "Tu" is for only one person, who can be a friend, a family member, or a child, etc...
I'd say "vous" to a teacher or someone I ask for direction in a street, while I say "tu" to my friends, my brother...
(Some families make children say "vous" to their parents but that's rather uncommon).
So, in this case, you can very well choose to use "vous", but if you prefer "tu" it goes like "Reviens à moi, mon frère. Reviens."