
6/12/2020 c6
1theatreandbooknerd
I love this story! This is so original compared to many of the Mauraders stories I’ve read.

I love this story! This is so original compared to many of the Mauraders stories I’ve read.
11/6/2015 c7 xNaruHina
This story was progressing so well till the whole prophecy thing. Now I sadly feel as if the story is going to go downhill from here. I'm not sure if I want to hear a bunch of chapters on how lily has tobtorture or kill people just to save thousands of lives. Why? She could've been building upon her friendship with James and they could have been happy. You had such a good buildup for them.
This story was progressing so well till the whole prophecy thing. Now I sadly feel as if the story is going to go downhill from here. I'm not sure if I want to hear a bunch of chapters on how lily has tobtorture or kill people just to save thousands of lives. Why? She could've been building upon her friendship with James and they could have been happy. You had such a good buildup for them.
10/21/2015 c20 Guest
AMAZING STORY
AMAZING STORY
8/6/2015 c9 Katy
This is so amazing and origanal, I've read fics where Lilly's ran away but noting like this! I'm so happy I found your story and can't wait to see what happens!
This is so amazing and origanal, I've read fics where Lilly's ran away but noting like this! I'm so happy I found your story and can't wait to see what happens!
7/6/2015 c33
9lost in a musical daydream
oh my god that was so sad. i remember you messaging me about "i know why the caged bird sings" and i am so ready to read it!

oh my god that was so sad. i remember you messaging me about "i know why the caged bird sings" and i am so ready to read it!
7/6/2015 c32 lost in a musical daydream
aah they're so happy and something terrible is going to happen i'm so upset
aah they're so happy and something terrible is going to happen i'm so upset
7/6/2015 c31 lost in a musical daydream
aaah, push through, lily! "merlin's bloody left buttock" indeed
aaah, push through, lily! "merlin's bloody left buttock" indeed
7/6/2015 c30 lost in a musical daydream
ugh i haven't reviewed this story in so long but i loved this chapter! baby harry is on the way!
ugh i haven't reviewed this story in so long but i loved this chapter! baby harry is on the way!
7/2/2014 c3 Amanda
I really wish that Lily wasn't so oblivious. Fan-fiction or not, it is so obvious that she likes James-Bloody-Potter as she puts it. She was probably the smartest which HER time. But alas, she can not she that the love of her life was always the one she always wanted to hex.
I really wish that Lily wasn't so oblivious. Fan-fiction or not, it is so obvious that she likes James-Bloody-Potter as she puts it. She was probably the smartest which HER time. But alas, she can not she that the love of her life was always the one she always wanted to hex.
12/23/2013 c1 Anon
Sounds very promising.
Sounds very promising.
12/7/2013 c33
12Alexjhag
Ok, I nearly freaking cried when I read this chapter. I literally saw October 31st and said that I was not ready for it. I loved the story from beginning to end. I actually put off schoolwork quite often to finish reading this. I loved your style of writing and most likely will be going to your page and checking out other stories you've written particularly anything Jily right now.

Ok, I nearly freaking cried when I read this chapter. I literally saw October 31st and said that I was not ready for it. I loved the story from beginning to end. I actually put off schoolwork quite often to finish reading this. I loved your style of writing and most likely will be going to your page and checking out other stories you've written particularly anything Jily right now.