9/17/2020 c2 Aurlia
Terrific start, I cannot wait to read more!

6/4/2014 c2 4Lady Labrat
Is Sarah going to be paired with Jareth?

12/15/2012 c2 1so-adorabloodthirsty
You should update this.

10/24/2012 c1 8Sponges Fan
Hah! I love the idea! My only comment, from this chapter only understand, is it seems rather...I don't know, quick? Like you need more description. Though it does slow a story down, descriptions raise the quality and overall make the fic more interesting.