for FiM:Equestrian Heroes!2/18/2013 c2 
1Randomreader-001
wow, not it's getting interesting. (goes to click on the next chapter)...HEY! Where's the next chapter?! ... T_T AAAhhh what happens next!? Oh well Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next one.
1Randomreader-001wow, not it's getting interesting. (goes to click on the next chapter)...HEY! Where's the next chapter?! ... T_T AAAhhh what happens next!? Oh well Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next one.
1/17/2013 c2 2TwiceMarked
Nice start, but if you don't m ind me asking, what was the MLP fic that you just couldn't get out of your head?
2TwiceMarkedNice start, but if you don't m ind me asking, what was the MLP fic that you just couldn't get out of your head?
12/21/2012 c2 5Lord Xantos A. Fowl
interesting veeery interesting, as someone new to the pony fandom I say not bad (I'm a whovian not a brony, I got interested in the show because of the character Dr Whooves)
ha strange name
5Lord Xantos A. Fowlinteresting veeery interesting, as someone new to the pony fandom I say not bad (I'm a whovian not a brony, I got interested in the show because of the character Dr Whooves)
ha strange name
10/19/2012 c2 Grr
Dafuq? Lol what a story I enjoyed it funny yet you have a smart naruto or so it seems go do what you do lol
Dafuq? Lol what a story I enjoyed it funny yet you have a smart naruto or so it seems go do what you do lol
10/18/2012 c2 Badum tss
Okay you are a crazy writer I mean come on! Naruto x my little pony?
Only you can make something like this.
here is a review and it is positive I have no idea of the little pony show only naruto and I thought, 'why not ?' the whole naruto stuck in a new world is old and used allot but you got me to stick till the latest chapter and it got me more interested so good job!
I await the next chapter
Okay you are a crazy writer I mean come on! Naruto x my little pony?
Only you can make something like this.
here is a review and it is positive I have no idea of the little pony show only naruto and I thought, 'why not ?' the whole naruto stuck in a new world is old and used allot but you got me to stick till the latest chapter and it got me more interested so good job!
I await the next chapter
10/16/2012 c1 1TraderTinker
Great story. Can't wait for you to expand this story and do the Kyuubi16 thing and make it even better.
1TraderTinkerGreat story. Can't wait for you to expand this story and do the Kyuubi16 thing and make it even better.
10/15/2012 c1 2XandricTheBeater
Wow... Before I even read this, I must tell you this: You are amazing... Literally the day before you posted this, I was considering contacting you about making a crossover like this! Thatnk you for reading my mind! Please don't do it again... it's easy to get lost in there...
2XandricTheBeaterWow... Before I even read this, I must tell you this: You are amazing... Literally the day before you posted this, I was considering contacting you about making a crossover like this! Thatnk you for reading my mind! Please don't do it again... it's easy to get lost in there...
10/14/2012 c1 agui972
i never saw the show MLP but the naruto crossover with the MLP that i had to see and was not disappointed i want to know more of how it started or how he fights the ombra guy
i never saw the show MLP but the naruto crossover with the MLP that i had to see and was not disappointed i want to know more of how it started or how he fights the ombra guy
10/13/2012 c1 7Shigiya
man dude it's these kind of stores that you make that i just love to read, the whole situation is fantastic, well not for naruto, but still... Anyway can't wait to find out how naruto fights the lord ombra in the next chapter, if it is in the next chapter
7Shigiyaman dude it's these kind of stores that you make that i just love to read, the whole situation is fantastic, well not for naruto, but still... Anyway can't wait to find out how naruto fights the lord ombra in the next chapter, if it is in the next chapter
10/12/2012 c1 Kazuki Shikimori
The only thing I can say is that if you watch this My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, and then go and watch Generations 1 to 3.5 of My Little Pony...you'll notice a huge difference (and improvements with Generation 4), lol.
It's cute and it keeps the general spirit of MLP ("Friendship is Magic" after all), but the characters, despite being ponies/pegasi/unicorns, feel a whole lot more human than the previous generations, thus they still feel relatable, with their own more unique personalities, flaws, problems, etc with various things, thus they actually have points of character development.
The previous generations all felt WAY too sugary-sweet, happy, etc practically all the time (almost "perfect"). Even Pinkie Pie in FiM, for all her happiness, smiles, energy, etc has points of sadness, anger, regret, etc. It's also more excusable when you learn a bit about her childhood and when she got her cutie mark.
I myself wondered just what made the show so popular when I started seeing YouTube vids of it everywhere, avatars/GIFs/etc of them popping up, people talking about it, so I checked it out when I saw it appear on Netflix and I literally could not stop watching after the first few episodes and sat through both seasons in that one night, lol. I even have Pinkie Pie's Smile Song memorized XD. Granted, I'm not a DIEHARD fan like knowing every little aspect of it, but I did become a fan of it very quickly and constantly rewatch episodes and they're still enjoyable.
I'm still not sure just WHAT it is about Friendship is Magic that makes it so huge, but obviously it's done something right, lol.
The only thing I can say is that if you watch this My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, and then go and watch Generations 1 to 3.5 of My Little Pony...you'll notice a huge difference (and improvements with Generation 4), lol.
It's cute and it keeps the general spirit of MLP ("Friendship is Magic" after all), but the characters, despite being ponies/pegasi/unicorns, feel a whole lot more human than the previous generations, thus they still feel relatable, with their own more unique personalities, flaws, problems, etc with various things, thus they actually have points of character development.
The previous generations all felt WAY too sugary-sweet, happy, etc practically all the time (almost "perfect"). Even Pinkie Pie in FiM, for all her happiness, smiles, energy, etc has points of sadness, anger, regret, etc. It's also more excusable when you learn a bit about her childhood and when she got her cutie mark.
I myself wondered just what made the show so popular when I started seeing YouTube vids of it everywhere, avatars/GIFs/etc of them popping up, people talking about it, so I checked it out when I saw it appear on Netflix and I literally could not stop watching after the first few episodes and sat through both seasons in that one night, lol. I even have Pinkie Pie's Smile Song memorized XD. Granted, I'm not a DIEHARD fan like knowing every little aspect of it, but I did become a fan of it very quickly and constantly rewatch episodes and they're still enjoyable.
I'm still not sure just WHAT it is about Friendship is Magic that makes it so huge, but obviously it's done something right, lol.
10/12/2012 c1 9BaseNikon
Interesting I think I'm going to like this story keep up the great work on all your stories
9BaseNikonInteresting I think I'm going to like this story keep up the great work on all your stories
10/12/2012 c1 Ramen junky
ya my little pony aint that bad just dont over do it and its i am suprised you would do a naruto/my little pony crossover!im going to send you a tip by pm.
ya my little pony aint that bad just dont over do it and its i am suprised you would do a naruto/my little pony crossover!im going to send you a tip by pm.