for FiM:Equestrian Heroes!10/1/2024 c1 Guest
whe can we get more update on naruto x american dad
whe can we get more update on naruto x american dad
9/25/2024 c68 Kitsune124
Busted also they really dig them self hole come on. I know it’s a teasing contest but still man. Lol I can’t stop laughing.
Busted also they really dig them self hole come on. I know it’s a teasing contest but still man. Lol I can’t stop laughing.
9/25/2024 c51 Kitsune124
This is really good for a story. I’m surprised how long it is. I’ve been waiting for a story like this for a long time, but to tell you in the last chapter what they tried to do to his friends in my mind I just kept thinking destroy those wannabe jerks.
Even worse, the big muscle idiot did the one thing I despise more than anything, attacked her applejack while her back was turned and almost tried to do that to Fluttershy.
Frankly, if I was Naruto I would focus my energy and pulling my inner Tsunade Senju and beat the living nightmare out of him and break every bone in his body and make sure he’s alive!
Because it’s one thing to do that with the civilian, it’s another to do that to an innocent woman. He’s nothing but a monster and human skin if he’s willing to do that while they’re back was turned. .
That was disgusting It only shows that that man, no that thing is only a beast that has no sympathy. It’s not only disgraceful. It’s dishonorable instead of being the bigger man you showed your true colors.
But frankly, I was hoping naruto would have let loose and tumble him to the ground a little bit more
This is really good for a story. I’m surprised how long it is. I’ve been waiting for a story like this for a long time, but to tell you in the last chapter what they tried to do to his friends in my mind I just kept thinking destroy those wannabe jerks.
Even worse, the big muscle idiot did the one thing I despise more than anything, attacked her applejack while her back was turned and almost tried to do that to Fluttershy.
Frankly, if I was Naruto I would focus my energy and pulling my inner Tsunade Senju and beat the living nightmare out of him and break every bone in his body and make sure he’s alive!
Because it’s one thing to do that with the civilian, it’s another to do that to an innocent woman. He’s nothing but a monster and human skin if he’s willing to do that while they’re back was turned. .
That was disgusting It only shows that that man, no that thing is only a beast that has no sympathy. It’s not only disgraceful. It’s dishonorable instead of being the bigger man you showed your true colors.
But frankly, I was hoping naruto would have let loose and tumble him to the ground a little bit more
59/14/2024 c291 Gamelover41592
289-291: excellent work on these chapters and great start to twilght's coronation :)
289-291: excellent work on these chapters and great start to twilght's coronation :)
7/8/2024 c66 Guest
Agreed
Agreed
7/7/2024 c38 Guest
That was soo casual! I wish I was that smooth!
That was soo casual! I wish I was that smooth!
7/2/2024 c1 otherbarry6
This is arguably one of the weirdest story ideas I've ever seen. You need help dude.
This is arguably one of the weirdest story ideas I've ever seen. You need help dude.
2/28/2024 c288 Guest
When is there going to be more Naruto and zecora moments
When is there going to be more Naruto and zecora moments
2/10/2024 c287 Sinn3r
You may need to work a little on your phrasing, it's odd. I suppose you don't speak english perfectly, and that's fine, but I would look for a Beta in order to convey your ideas clearly. The harem part of this is bery different from the norm and that's very incredible, alongside the use of different terminologies people wouldn't normally use, so good on that. The power svaling is a little odd, and you need to make sure to specify who's POV we're looking at because entire paragraphs go by without explanation.
You may need to work a little on your phrasing, it's odd. I suppose you don't speak english perfectly, and that's fine, but I would look for a Beta in order to convey your ideas clearly. The harem part of this is bery different from the norm and that's very incredible, alongside the use of different terminologies people wouldn't normally use, so good on that. The power svaling is a little odd, and you need to make sure to specify who's POV we're looking at because entire paragraphs go by without explanation.