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10/15/2012 c1 8IzzytheGreat14
Awww, cool.
You know you love me, IzzytheGreat14
10/13/2012 c1 6StoryGirl4121
Thanks for the reviews. I know about the play like format. I had writen this before I joined. I always think of them as in episode format, so I guess that is why I did it this way. But thanks . :)
10/13/2012 c1 Em
10/13/2012 c1 Guest
The ending is kinda cliche, but it's still really cute.
10/13/2012 c1 6PianoMan5
Nice story, I liked the whole thing. Just a few things: It looks like you chose to write this sort of in the format of a play. I guess this is okay, but you might want to change your future stories to a more traditional style of writing (for example, using quotation marks instead of having Phineas and Isabella talk on their own lines.) Also, make sure you put in punctuation, spell check, and capitalize appropriately everywhere, most of it was pretty good but in a few places I noticed some mistakes (for example, gaz is actually gaze).

I thought the ending with the kids was a bit random, but funny nonetheless. I'm excited to see what else you can come up with!

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