11/16/2012 c1 Guest
love it! the ending awesome
love it! the ending awesome
10/26/2012 c1 El-san
The ending was adorable! I am very fond of it. I don't think the scene with Black Star and Tsubaki was necessary, because of the scene with Kid and Liz, but aside from that your fanfic was fun. The overall feeling throughout this fanfic, the beginning as awkwardness, to nonchalant acceptance of Soul's proposal at the end, was nice. Great Work!
The ending was adorable! I am very fond of it. I don't think the scene with Black Star and Tsubaki was necessary, because of the scene with Kid and Liz, but aside from that your fanfic was fun. The overall feeling throughout this fanfic, the beginning as awkwardness, to nonchalant acceptance of Soul's proposal at the end, was nice. Great Work!
10/26/2012 c1 I'mnotsorryforleaving
Me: LMFAO
Soul: why am I such a wuss?
Maka: SOUL-KUN! (giggles and tackle hugs Soul*
Soul: MAKA-CHAN!
Me: *walks out of the room mumbling something about going shopping while smiling knowingly*
Me: LMFAO
Soul: why am I such a wuss?
Maka: SOUL-KUN! (giggles and tackle hugs Soul*
Soul: MAKA-CHAN!
Me: *walks out of the room mumbling something about going shopping while smiling knowingly*
10/14/2012 c1 Guest
Wow amazing as usual it's cute!Nice going lord death :)
Wow amazing as usual it's cute!Nice going lord death :)
10/14/2012 c1 4Penelopeloo
That ending was not crappy xD That ending was genius! Wow. Nice going lord death xD
That ending was not crappy xD That ending was genius! Wow. Nice going lord death xD