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10/16/2017 c1 Tamara
You have a great story so far, but you need to lengthen it, for instance...

Why did Harry get a beating from his uncle Vernon, there is no back story.

Is this the only time Harry has performed Accidental Magic, or is there more to it?

Did anyone notice Harry Potter had disapeared from number 4 Privit Drive, like wizards or even his relatives?

Once again I commend you on a great start to your story, it can only improve from here.
2/9/2015 c1 1Almia
Please update your idea is very interesting and I would love to read more
1/21/2015 c1 5Kain Vixenheim
How to improve it huh?
...
How about adding chapter number 2

Keep with what you're doing
(Assuming you have a plan)
It's going great and I think it's an interesting idea
(Quite a feat considering this is the first one which goes to merlons time which I haven't just ignored)
1/3/2014 c1 7rmiser1994
awesome start .
11/17/2012 c1 awake untill day brake
This story is looking to be a good one can't wait for the next chapter
10/31/2012 c1 1Mahjong King
Please make the chapters longer interesting concept
10/26/2012 c1 Guest
keep going
10/24/2012 c1 Kyle
Okay you have a good plot if the summary is anything to go by, you need to focus on chapter length and getting that increased. I think the whole Harry wild is good but I wouldn't put him as cub/pack mate to wolves it's unrealistic, I know it's fiction lol but il explain what I mean, it is something that is overused now to be honest if you do it tastefully it could turn out to be good if you have it that Harry sort of lives alongside, not one if them, and they have a kind of mutual relationship like the odd occasion where they would share food with Harry, not like talking to each other or anything like, you could have harry speak to them but them not talk back if you get me quick example ' the wolf nudged along the slightly rotted apple, that appeared to have fallen from the tree above, towards Harry. Harry with a deep hunger rooted in to his empty stomach wasn't about to turn away the strange hospitality of the animal I front of him. Stretching his hand out slowly he very hesitantly picked up the apple giveing it a curious sniff, ignoring the sickly smell being given off, he bit into it giving a slight moan as it passed his lips. Opening his eyes he looked at the wolf in front of him, head titled staring at him puzzlingly, "Thank you, Mr Wolf, I was really hungry". The wolf quirked one ear before turning tail and heading back to the small rabbit that it had caught earlier giving one last look over its shoulder back at Harry before resuming its meal.' Sometking like that would be ideal if you get me yeah there is a kind of bond and its not to untealstic altruistic bahaviour is known in animals. I just think you could really have something here lol anyway if you want to discuss it further or get back you can get me on Kyle-ZZ I just couldn't be bothered logging in :P best wishes kyle
10/24/2012 c1 3Kyle-ZZ
Hey logged in just incase you want to get back to me :)
10/23/2012 c1 1DoctorWho41
Good start and is he going to be like the Huntsmen from Once Upon a Time.
10/18/2012 c1 5Luke Dragneel
interesting if short, hope you can make more
10/16/2012 c1 4ButterflyBlair
Very interesting start. I'm looking forward to see where you go with it :)
10/16/2012 c1 mattcun
plz write more
10/16/2012 c1 3frytrix
Well, you have a great start, altough the chapter is way to short.
I sugest adding a tad bit more details, and make the chapters at least 2000 words or longer per chapter.

Good Luck
10/15/2012 c1 Damion Black Blaze
It seems to be a very good premise, the second to last paragraph seems rushed. No spelling errors (which is a god-send when compared to other stories that are being written on ), I do hope you continue the story as well as have longer chapters than this.

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